Awesome Aerosaltant
Bee sure to catch his performance this Spring44 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
I really liked this cheerful poem! You used a great aspect of humour to describe the bee's usual antics, and I could clearly imagine the bee in my mind. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I really liked this cheerful poem! You used a great aspect of humour to describe the bee's usual antics, and I could clearly imagine the bee in my mind. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great poem showing us that they do not want to harm us if we will leave them alone. Their movements are their own. They have their work to do, and it is to our best interest to let them get on with it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This is a great poem showing us that they do not want to harm us if we will leave them alone. Their movements are their own. They have their work to do, and it is to our best interest to let them get on with it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!!
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Ha ha Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the "The Bee" writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse describes a bee very well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the "The Bee" writing prompt.
This well rhymed verse describes a bee very well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!!
Comment from J.R. Preston
Clever poem that is so much fun to read. The poem flowed, so nicely and made me smile as I read it. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Clever poem that is so much fun to read. The poem flowed, so nicely and made me smile as I read it. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
Comment from Raul1
Taking about bees they sure do sting you. Well written poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Taking about bees they sure do sting you. Well written poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review. ;-)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Love this! The sound of the bee in comparison to a string quartet! Brilliant!
Your presentation is great too.
This clever bloke who works all day
Has perfected air ballet -
Though pollen is his main pursuit,
His flying skills are absolute .... this stanza is my favourite. Perfected ballet and the rhyme words, pursuit, absolute
Drew
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Love this! The sound of the bee in comparison to a string quartet! Brilliant!
Your presentation is great too.
This clever bloke who works all day
Has perfected air ballet -
Though pollen is his main pursuit,
His flying skills are absolute .... this stanza is my favourite. Perfected ballet and the rhyme words, pursuit, absolute
Drew
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and may you have a beeyoutiful weekend!!
Comment from Rachel Joyce
such an interesting topic! you were able to turn a 'bee' story into an exciting poem! I loved it! God bless you and your family, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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such an interesting topic! you were able to turn a 'bee' story into an exciting poem! I loved it! God bless you and your family, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!!🌞
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You are very welcome!
Comment from DeboraDyess
What a wonderful contest entry! So far, this is certainly my favorite, and I cannot imagine anyone doing a better job. I loved it all, but especially enjoyed the second stanza. Brilliant!
Blessings and best in the contest and in the crazy of each day,
Deb
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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What a wonderful contest entry! So far, this is certainly my favorite, and I cannot imagine anyone doing a better job. I loved it all, but especially enjoyed the second stanza. Brilliant!
Blessings and best in the contest and in the crazy of each day,
Deb
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!!🌞
Comment from nomi338
Although bees can be objects of fear to those who fear being stung. What bees do for the world, pollinating blossoms and producing honey, cannot be minimized. Where would the world be without honey? A world without honey is not one in which I wish to live. Thank you Mister Humble, Bumble Honey Bee.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Although bees can be objects of fear to those who fear being stung. What bees do for the world, pollinating blossoms and producing honey, cannot be minimized. Where would the world be without honey? A world without honey is not one in which I wish to live. Thank you Mister Humble, Bumble Honey Bee.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you! 🌞
Comment from sunnilicious
That's a great artwork choice. It's very focused like this poem. Well thought out and creatively written. Excellent personification of bee into human life. Good alliterations that all work together nicely. Great flow of rhythm and rhymes. Wonderful storytelling. Fun!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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That's a great artwork choice. It's very focused like this poem. Well thought out and creatively written. Excellent personification of bee into human life. Good alliterations that all work together nicely. Great flow of rhythm and rhymes. Wonderful storytelling. Fun!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!!
