Thankful
A Free Verse poem...26 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely free verse Diana where you've allowed your emotions your thoughts to flow.
Moving through the gloom into the light and leaving the negative behind. Lovely work, cheers
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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A lovely free verse Diana where you've allowed your emotions your thoughts to flow.
Moving through the gloom into the light and leaving the negative behind. Lovely work, cheers
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much! Your encouraging feedback is truly appreciated. xoxo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is presented in a great way. I like the color scheme, the image, and most of all the message. Your lines flow smoothly with well-thought out thoughts that are pertinent to the theme. Your conclusion is perfect. Yes, praying will defeat the negative--turn your thoughts to positive. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Your poem is presented in a great way. I like the color scheme, the image, and most of all the message. Your lines flow smoothly with well-thought out thoughts that are pertinent to the theme. Your conclusion is perfect. Yes, praying will defeat the negative--turn your thoughts to positive. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much!! Got to keep our spirits up during this probably the most antsiest time of all now. appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thankful
by Diana L Crawford
Hello, Diana,
You did a great job expressing how you feel when darkness overwhelmes you and only prayer helps you find peace.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thankful
by Diana L Crawford
Hello, Diana,
You did a great job expressing how you feel when darkness overwhelmes you and only prayer helps you find peace.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much! It is a difficult time for all right now! got to keep those spirits lifted. Not much longer to go! xoxo
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed this poem very much. It is drenched in sorrow, until it becomes a cry for the benefits of prayer. Apart from the calling to prayer, I particularly liked the image thrown up by:
"your life of gloom
... the head talk inside"
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed this poem very much. It is drenched in sorrow, until it becomes a cry for the benefits of prayer. Apart from the calling to prayer, I particularly liked the image thrown up by:
"your life of gloom
... the head talk inside"
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks Katherine! So many are facing depression right now, so wanted to try to keep a positive message going! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Kathleen S.
Very encouraging poem. It's very expressive as well as the picture, that you've chosen to accompany it. It's very wise as well. I love the song, that you've posted underneath it. I listened to it. I had never heard that song before. Thank you for creating this work. :)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Very encouraging poem. It's very expressive as well as the picture, that you've chosen to accompany it. It's very wise as well. I love the song, that you've posted underneath it. I listened to it. I had never heard that song before. Thank you for creating this work. :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you! The song is so awesome! I found it on accident! appreciate you enjoyed this! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about darkness and fear that overtakes us and control us until we find time to pray and regain our light and faith to overwhelm darkness and fear.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about darkness and fear that overtakes us and control us until we find time to pray and regain our light and faith to overwhelm darkness and fear.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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thanks Sandra, got to keep the message uplifting right now! not much longer to go!! xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Thankful, brings the idea of light in the darkness. No one left in the dark or lost in the shadows. Prayer can make a difference.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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This poem, Thankful, brings the idea of light in the darkness. No one left in the dark or lost in the shadows. Prayer can make a difference.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks Bill, need the positive message right now! But not much longer to go hopefully!! xoxo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Prayer is always a good thing to work on! I like this line best:
when your soul sinks below
That has some nice, subtle 's' alliteration with soul, sinks, and also some long 'o' assonance with soul, below. Nice share on a free verse.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Prayer is always a good thing to work on! I like this line best:
when your soul sinks below
That has some nice, subtle 's' alliteration with soul, sinks, and also some long 'o' assonance with soul, below. Nice share on a free verse.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanks Crystie, sorry for the delay in responding. It has been a bit busy at my house with the shut down and all! Glad you liked this one!! xoxo
Comment from Minglement
Wow. You blow me away with this beautiful, positive poem. I think if I were in a dark place, which rarely happens, I would be able to receive this message and be encouraged. You probably will never know who you may touch with a work like this. Thanks for sharing. Bless you.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Wow. You blow me away with this beautiful, positive poem. I think if I were in a dark place, which rarely happens, I would be able to receive this message and be encouraged. You probably will never know who you may touch with a work like this. Thanks for sharing. Bless you.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much! sorry for the delay in responding. appreciate you liked this one! xoxo
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No problem, I'm way behind, too. In the middle of a move. You know I love your work :) Take care, Marcia
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very interesting take on the power and voice of the prayer when the darkness is trying to take over. Problem and solution, question and answered.
"What do you do
when darkness surrounds
when your soul sinks below
"you take to praying
a negative thought cannot reside
where a positive thought is in control."
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Very interesting take on the power and voice of the prayer when the darkness is trying to take over. Problem and solution, question and answered.
"What do you do
when darkness surrounds
when your soul sinks below
"you take to praying
a negative thought cannot reside
where a positive thought is in control."
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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:) thanks for appreciating this! Need some uplifting messages right now. xoxoxo
