Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This bee poem, Drone, is a funny poem that finds the titular bee bemoaning his stay-at-home existence. Oh to fly free and bee seen.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a great poem showing us that they do not want to harm us if we will leave them alone. They have their work to do, and it is to our best interest to let them get on with it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. They may have a job to do but I am not a fan lol

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Many would envy his role here, but we always want what we can't have don't we, this is a fun rhyming poem, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Interesting poetic expose of the hierarchy amidst a hive of bees and the various 'duties' to be performed -'Smelling roses /for pollen collection '- lovely pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Rachel Joyce

Exceptional

I love this! it is such an interesting topic and no one would think about this without your poem. I like the picture you included, and it rhymes very well. Great job!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review.
Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! A wonderfully upbeat and educational offering that fires the visual and the imagination! Good personification so that the reader is 'in there' with you! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

Great usage of the words. It almost felt as if there was a buzzing sound while reading this. It was very well written. I liked it a lot! Good luck in the contest! Respectfully, -January L.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit

Excellent

I really like the ease of this when reading. It flows really well with the language and format chosen, and I think that really adds to the overall effect.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020

Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed.