Ode to Karpo
Happy when she comes, but she will leave us cold.2 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Seasons are always good for inspiration. Here it was required to use the word autumn, so it was an obvious choice. You wrote a lovely 5-7-5 poem, using also the spectacular colors of autumn. Very well done. Good you wrote an explanation to Karpo. I didn't know that was the Greek goddess of Autumn.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Seasons are always good for inspiration. Here it was required to use the word autumn, so it was an obvious choice. You wrote a lovely 5-7-5 poem, using also the spectacular colors of autumn. Very well done. Good you wrote an explanation to Karpo. I didn't know that was the Greek goddess of Autumn.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and your feedback. Much appreciated.
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You are so welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Oh, I like the personification and the grins of the play on words, mystery author! ;) Well-done!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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LOL! Oh, I like the personification and the grins of the play on words, mystery author! ;) Well-done!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and your feedback. Much appreciated.