Critics Choice
An ode to Autumn12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Critics Choice, has the right set up and gives the season a colorful gown to wear at the height of her popularity.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Critics Choice, has the right set up and gives the season a colorful gown to wear at the height of her popularity.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed CRITICS CHOICE, Bill. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from Drew Delaney
I love the picture used to go with the poem. The comparison here of the curtain call is ingenious and well thought out. It is not my gift to come up with such ideas. Lovely!
Drew
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I love the picture used to go with the poem. The comparison here of the curtain call is ingenious and well thought out. It is not my gift to come up with such ideas. Lovely!
Drew
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Drew, for your rave review.
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated. Autumn has always been my favorite season. My native Georgia and New York win the standings ovation for me.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Beautifully penned and illustrated. Autumn has always been my favorite season. My native Georgia and New York win the standings ovation for me.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the rave review, Sally. Autumn in northern Illinois is grand, too.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt. Nice presentation. Good topic for Autumn. The grammatical connection between lines could be improved.
Well done. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt. Nice presentation. Good topic for Autumn. The grammatical connection between lines could be improved.
Well done. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my presentation of Autumn, Gypsy. I?ll take a look at that ?grammatical connection between lines.?
Comment from Mark D. R.
A great painting accompanies your 5-7-5 entry. It describes the seasonal change to our audience of man.
IMHO... Your text would benefit from a larger font size. As the poet, you can best decide if bolded text is an other attribute to consider.
Missed your original post, but did review the contest entries. Good luck in voting.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A great painting accompanies your 5-7-5 entry. It describes the seasonal change to our audience of man.
IMHO... Your text would benefit from a larger font size. As the poet, you can best decide if bolded text is an other attribute to consider.
Missed your original post, but did review the contest entries. Good luck in voting.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hello, Mark. Thank you so much for rave review and those six shining stars. I will see if I can enlarge the font.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, such a lovely and unexpected offering for this contest -- wonderful and exciting in both writing and approach!! ;) Best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Oh, such a lovely and unexpected offering for this contest -- wonderful and exciting in both writing and approach!! ;) Best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the rave review and best wishes.
Comment from samandlancelot
And the vote is in: Autumn wins another grand performance. I'm in the audience, and I'm standing, too.
Excellent haiku and ode to autumn.
Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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And the vote is in: Autumn wins another grand performance. I'm in the audience, and I'm standing, too.
Excellent haiku and ode to autumn.
Patricia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Patricia. I am so glad you are in the audience and appreciated the performance.
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a very well thought out poem. I enjoyed the idea of Autumn being like a person... or the season. It made me think a bit. The picture is gorgeous and really lends itself to the poem. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This is a very well thought out poem. I enjoyed the idea of Autumn being like a person... or the season. It made me think a bit. The picture is gorgeous and really lends itself to the poem. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, January. I am delighted you like my personification of Autumn.
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
An interesting take on the contest topic. I think it works well. I think it works well that there are some long words with high syllable counts, as it helps it helps it flow smoothly.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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An interesting take on the contest topic. I think it works well. I think it works well that there are some long words with high syllable counts, as it helps it helps it flow smoothly.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I am delighted you like my poem and my word choices. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is wonderful. Great writing. I can see the presence of the person she is giving the ode to....it was her director or perhaps her parent. See you at the polls.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Your poem is wonderful. Great writing. I can see the presence of the person she is giving the ode to....it was her director or perhaps her parent. See you at the polls.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, Rosemary, for your rave review and those six stunning stars.