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Oh Deer, I'm Fawn of You

A young deer visits my side yard.

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Comment from LisaMay
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What a delight to see such an attractive young animal at close quarters. Shame about your garden! I loved this line: "They like to nosh on my hosta". You have described the encounter so we can clearly picture you in your robe, sneaking around with your camera to get a subject for your delightful poem.

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comment. I'm glad your like that line.
    Beth