Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Now this one I think I understand well and it is lovely - pure and elegantly spoken. The triumph of light over darkness is truth and beautiful.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.

Comment from Crystal Carey

Excellent

He will take the wise and make them see their folly, he will take the rich and make them poor. I enjoyed this one as well, albeit not as much as the one right before it. But than no two works are the same! Good job!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR YOUR APPRECIABLE REVIEW.

Comment from ravenblack

Good

this one i understand. and yes, i do know that understanding a poem require work from the reader as well as the poet serving as a guide. you just tend to make it more difficult w/stylistic/syntactical choices than it needs to be.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

This is also very deep, I read it twice and liked it more the second time, reminds me of the fallacies of religion under the earth and sun,

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Dark, salutes false light,
Shades truth, soars humdrum, hourly
Sun shines silent still;
Timeless wisdom glows whole earth,
Fake fables fade, fall, faint fast.

Dark is something we need to rest. It's not all bad nor is sunshine all good thought one might think so. To me it's a 50/50 deal.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR YOUR NICE REVIEW.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tanka seems like an exercise in poetic devices such as assonance, consonance, and alliteration. The replacement of sensations such as brightness for silent is intriguing.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello . Alcreator Litt Dear
You are a deep thinker and kno how to expressed your self with a few words.

here is my simple reply

It's more then sage ( wisdom)
that should be sought
one can view in darkness
to find decorous light
to un-shade the truth
to eliminate all pretend fables

Gert

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for professional review

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Good job here, my friend. I can understand this one. LOL.You certainly are an advance stage poet. By that I mean I think you are a professional writer at this juncture. Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for wonderful review

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Alcreator Litt Dear - I like the way you write your poetry and also make styles of your own. This is another very interesting poem. Kat

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

Comment from G.B. Smith

Good

a fairly good piece here. You really needed the Authors notes, but with them made the finishing touches it turned out better than I had expected
Bear

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

THANKS.