Comment from mshugh

Excellent

This one I definitely understood, but I have a question. Do you need that comma after the word dark? I am not sure of it's purpose

Well done

Michael

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from Titanx9

Excellent

I realized a long ago, in others as well as myself, that there's a constant battle between the light and darkness of which you speak. Therefore, those who seek light must test all those who profess they are harbingers of light, some could be dark. I believe true wisdom, light, comes when internal belief systems are dispelled and you become new in all the ways that matter. Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful poetry. I love it because each piece causes one to think and go inward. Peace!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from bhogg

Excellent

I've read several of your posts and this one I get (almost). They're not really easily understood, even with pretty good reflection. Good luck in your book. Bill

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from Nebukadneser

Excellent

Wow, my friend. Another great poem in Tanka form. You are the wise one with the insight into life's truths which you share with us. I love your opening line -Fools salute false light, This is so absolutely true - but fools will always be amongst us. Keep on writing, my friend
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from guinea

Excellent

Another great work here. Your talent is remarkable. Shows deep thinking and a treasure of ideas. Your book is quite good. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

An enjoyable reminder of wisdom and truth over the
fools world. Your picture choice of wisdom is
impressive and your message dramatically presented in so few words.
Robin :)

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from MidnightWriter4U

Excellent

And the only true wisdom that has survived down through the ages is God's Word. Darkness has tried to hide Its light, but the Word will survive throughout eternity.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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reply by MidnightWriter4U on 09-Apr-2013

You are welcome. MN :)

Comment from isurp

Excellent

I like the 5-7-5-7-5 structure that you employ in this poem. Timeless wisdom overcomes false light and fake fables. You make use of amazing alliteration wit all the F's in the last line. Write on! -Steve

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Exceptional tanka poem. I place into the Commentary / Philosophy or Religious category. Nice artwork. Well thought out and nicely written with vivid imagery. Wonderful.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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Comment from EMB

Excellent

Here, we have wisdom doing the "glowing," which I find to be as peculiar as the other piece that I've read. I'm no poet, which is probably why much of this is beyond my immediate comprehension.

Interesting, though.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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