Oh Life!
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Comment from dmt1967
This is another good poem I think the picture enhances the poem and gives it more body for a short poem it says a lot thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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This is another good poem I think the picture enhances the poem and gives it more body for a short poem it says a lot thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good wisdom and understanding at display in this work. I like the alliterations in the third and the fifth lines, very creative.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Good wisdom and understanding at display in this work. I like the alliterations in the third and the fifth lines, very creative.
ola thomas
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR GOOD CREATIVE REVIEW.
Comment from emjaihammond
This is nicely done. The subject matter holds true. The light brings truth along with it resulting in the last line of the poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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This is nicely done. The subject matter holds true. The light brings truth along with it resulting in the last line of the poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is a good poem. I agree with the false light in the dark. A light is always shining. Sun is silent. There is much truth in your poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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This is a good poem. I agree with the false light in the dark. A light is always shining. Sun is silent. There is much truth in your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENDABLE REVIEW.
Comment from Sanku
good alliteration i sun shines silently
sound 'f' giving a good effect in the last line .
cowards are afraid of truth.
light reveals the truth.
false light shades a lot.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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good alliteration i sun shines silently
sound 'f' giving a good effect in the last line .
cowards are afraid of truth.
light reveals the truth.
false light shades a lot.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey Dear, good to see that you are still posting. You are so right on the money with all your posts, so keep em comin' and I'll stop by from time to time to read them.
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Hey Dear, good to see that you are still posting. You are so right on the money with all your posts, so keep em comin' and I'll stop by from time to time to read them.
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR SUGGESTIVE FEEDBACK.
Comment from steevie
The darkness in God's word has always symbolized wickedness and wrong doing, where as the light is pure and that is where God shines His glory through.
steve
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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The darkness in God's word has always symbolized wickedness and wrong doing, where as the light is pure and that is where God shines His glory through.
steve
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR LOVELY REVIEW.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
True wisdom stands boldly in the light of day and is not fooled by the darkness of the night. Most foolishness takes place under the cover of darkness and seeks to stay concealed. Lies or fake fables are most prominent under the cover of false light. Considering the sun to be the true light, electric bulbs at night produce artificial light. Extensive, the thoughts run dark and deep.
Curtis
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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True wisdom stands boldly in the light of day and is not fooled by the darkness of the night. Most foolishness takes place under the cover of darkness and seeks to stay concealed. Lies or fake fables are most prominent under the cover of false light. Considering the sun to be the true light, electric bulbs at night produce artificial light. Extensive, the thoughts run dark and deep.
Curtis
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR EXTENSIVE PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from hagen
Imagery is simple,yet subtle. Your point of view in this piece is much more forthcoming. I love it because it happens to be universally true.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Imagery is simple,yet subtle. Your point of view in this piece is much more forthcoming. I love it because it happens to be universally true.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR GOOD REVIEW.
Comment from Matthew M.
The dark can hide so many mysteries, while the light can expose that darkness. It is the light that shines it truth on the false fables and tales. The truth eventually will always be known.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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The dark can hide so many mysteries, while the light can expose that darkness. It is the light that shines it truth on the false fables and tales. The truth eventually will always be known.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.
