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Oh Life!

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Experiences of living

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Comment from kkholder
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Yes... I see it. This is the twisty-turny kind of word play! I like it. We, like poor little moths, really can get burned.

Fake dies for good. I want that to mean that fake dies once and for all. I fear you may mean fake dies in behalf of good...I'm not sure if I agree.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2006

Comment from Brantley88
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You made an excellent point about false wisdom here. It is true that true wisdom has a life force of its own, and false wisdom, like false prophets, are lost to the sands. Nice write.

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2006