Why Do You Eat?
Who will win the battle?15 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
This Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry is well set and fixed within its syllables counting and beautifully described throughout its uncontrollable food hunger invitation narrative story lined content. Great work! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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This Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry is well set and fixed within its syllables counting and beautifully described throughout its uncontrollable food hunger invitation narrative story lined content. Great work! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Tony. I appreciate you and your reviews.
Patricia
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Most people probably do eat sweets when driven by emotion. Emotions when uncontrolled can and do wreck havoc in our lives and the lives of those around us. Eating too much is hard on our bodies.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Most people probably do eat sweets when driven by emotion. Emotions when uncontrolled can and do wreck havoc in our lives and the lives of those around us. Eating too much is hard on our bodies.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Rebecca, for your review and comments.
Patricia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Why Do You Eat?
Hello my friend,
Good syllable count and presentation. Lines connect grammatically and flow well.
I know what you mean, people tend to eat more when it's hard to deal with emotions.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Why Do You Eat?
Hello my friend,
Good syllable count and presentation. Lines connect grammatically and flow well.
I know what you mean, people tend to eat more when it's hard to deal with emotions.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy Blue Rose. I appreciate your review and comments.
Patricia
Comment from victor 66
There is something about comfort food, especially sweets and more especially chocolate, that brings a certain short term feeling of contentment that sometimes we need to survive. This could be one of those times. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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There is something about comfort food, especially sweets and more especially chocolate, that brings a certain short term feeling of contentment that sometimes we need to survive. This could be one of those times. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Victor. I appreciate your review and comments.
Patricia
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You're most welcome, Patricia. It was my pleasure.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are cute, sweet, clear and creative. The first two
lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all!
The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Have a great day!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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The author's words are cute, sweet, clear and creative. The first two
lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all!
The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Have a great day!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Harmony. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very truthful and observant presentation. The emotions are in control almost always. They are the hardest thing to quell. Ergo, chocolates, whip cream, eclairs, and you name it. Well done, stay safe.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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A very truthful and observant presentation. The emotions are in control almost always. They are the hardest thing to quell. Ergo, chocolates, whip cream, eclairs, and you name it. Well done, stay safe.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Raffaelina. I appreciate your menu options.
Comment from Drew Delaney
That pic is so cute. I think we all have hunger issues these days since the virus began. Stress causes us to feel hungry all the time. I heard last night on tv, that millions are going to starve in the coming future. Anyway, let's not go there. Be happy today.
Drew
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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That pic is so cute. I think we all have hunger issues these days since the virus began. Stress causes us to feel hungry all the time. I heard last night on tv, that millions are going to starve in the coming future. Anyway, let's not go there. Be happy today.
Drew
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Drew. Hopefully by then we'll have answers to overcome.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
This senryu is a good one! Syllable count as required and the human emotion is there big as life. Oooooh! When the emotion flares up, what I wouldn't do to stuff myself with sweet things, preferably chocolate or icecream. The only defense I have is simply NOT buying it, so I don't have it in the house and cannot give in to the strong temptation.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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This senryu is a good one! Syllable count as required and the human emotion is there big as life. Oooooh! When the emotion flares up, what I wouldn't do to stuff myself with sweet things, preferably chocolate or icecream. The only defense I have is simply NOT buying it, so I don't have it in the house and cannot give in to the strong temptation.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Marjon, Good advice, if I listened. I appreciate your delicious feedback.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about the craving to eat more when we are stressed is never a good thing and we need to control our cravings especially when we don't get much exercise.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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A very well-written Senryu about the craving to eat more when we are stressed is never a good thing and we need to control our cravings especially when we don't get much exercise.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Sandra. Oh, yeah exercise, even if the gyms are closed. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
That need for food sometimes replaces other needs
and usually results in more problems.
A vicious circle.
Nicely done
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
That need for food sometimes replaces other needs
and usually results in more problems.
A vicious circle.
Nicely done
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your review and comments.