Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "A Mother's Becoming"na-po-wri-mo contest
9 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks both pain and joy, experience of becoming a mother, sad labour moments and happiness, joy and confidence after giving birth a baby; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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This poem speaks both pain and joy, experience of becoming a mother, sad labour moments and happiness, joy and confidence after giving birth a baby; well said, well done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from January L'Angelle
How beautifully said! I loved this poem. I reminded me of the birth of my own son... now 30 years old. Sorry that you didn't have support at first, that must have been really upsetting. But, it seems that you got it later. I enjoyed the poem a lot. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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How beautifully said! I loved this poem. I reminded me of the birth of my own son... now 30 years old. Sorry that you didn't have support at first, that must have been really upsetting. But, it seems that you got it later. I enjoyed the poem a lot. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear January, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
It really is an effort rather a sacrifice that all the mother's in the world take to give birth to a child whom they are yet to know... It's really well written..Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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It really is an effort rather a sacrifice that all the mother's in the world take to give birth to a child whom they are yet to know... It's really well written..Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Shreyamsi1, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem for Mother's day. The memories of a first born and time to become a part of being a mother is the best thing than can happen to any young woman.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem for Mother's day. The memories of a first born and time to become a part of being a mother is the best thing than can happen to any young woman.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Dove, expressing that feeling of being alone at first then support showed to help you when your son was born. Your rhymes are good, there is good flow, the image is fitting, and your final message is of love for your son despite the pain of birth. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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You did a great job, Dove, expressing that feeling of being alone at first then support showed to help you when your son was born. Your rhymes are good, there is good flow, the image is fitting, and your final message is of love for your son despite the pain of birth. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your compliments and review. Yours, Donna
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there. A very poignant and inspiring and beautiful poem you wrote. Great message of being a Mom. Very well written Mother's Day poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi there. A very poignant and inspiring and beautiful poem you wrote. Great message of being a Mom. Very well written Mother's Day poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi Lourens, Thank you for your compliments and review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I'm sure every mother who reads this lovely, touching piece will be nodding their heads--remembering the barrage of emotions that come with birthing a child.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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I'm sure every mother who reads this lovely, touching piece will be nodding their heads--remembering the barrage of emotions that come with birthing a child.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Dear Janice, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Cindy Decker
Good morning. I enjoyed your poem immensely. People with children are so lucky as, if you do a good job, children will love you forever.
Best wishes to you and yours,
Cindy
Is that you in the photo? Very beautiful.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Good morning. I enjoyed your poem immensely. People with children are so lucky as, if you do a good job, children will love you forever.
Best wishes to you and yours,
Cindy
Is that you in the photo? Very beautiful.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Dear Cindy, Thanks for your enjoyment of my poem. Thank you for your best wishes. The photo was from Pixabay. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a sad time to be alone when you are having a baby but once the baby is born you are no longer alone! I enjoyed your sweet words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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It is a sad time to be alone when you are having a baby but once the baby is born you are no longer alone! I enjoyed your sweet words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove You probably know from my other poems about my son that he was taken away from me and that I was alone with a mess, DSS and courts and psychiatric problems. I am also alone now since he doesn't want to hear from me. Love, Donna x
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I know Donna, I feel for you x
