Your Mood Will Improve
Strategies for happiness:13 total reviews
Comment from Puzzle
Yes these are all of the things that make me happy! Puppies and chocolate and dancing around! I love the last line too. What makes your heart move? Embrace it. Great job and good luck!
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Yes these are all of the things that make me happy! Puppies and chocolate and dancing around! I love the last line too. What makes your heart move? Embrace it. Great job and good luck!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Susan X Smith
I found this poem to be simple, yet pleasing. The rhythm and rhyme work well together. The tone is positive and upbeat. The picture of a puppy is the perfect complement.
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I found this poem to be simple, yet pleasing. The rhythm and rhyme work well together. The tone is positive and upbeat. The picture of a puppy is the perfect complement.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from HansiJ
I love the idea of your poem. You have shown that happiness can be gained from much more simpler things in life. People tend to complicate happiness by giving it a price. On the contrary it has always been there for free. If some one can see it, its up for grabs in plenty.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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I love the idea of your poem. You have shown that happiness can be gained from much more simpler things in life. People tend to complicate happiness by giving it a price. On the contrary it has always been there for free. If some one can see it, its up for grabs in plenty.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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It sounds like you have the right attitude to be a happy person yourself. There is a saying: "The best things in life are free" - that makes sense to me. Thanks for your review.
