Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written hundred word horror poem about ordering take out food. We eat until nothing is left and our food start to eating us until we are not if anymore use to the ghoul.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

so cool
you had me dying to get to the next line to see what happens
love the last line
scary and funny
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020

Thank you, smileycloud

Comment from Frank Jauregui

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your humorous horror story. I thought for sure this was going to turn out to be something about the Corona Virus for some reason. I glad it wasn't, it has kind of been overdone. But your poem is well done, I think it will do well in this contest.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020

Thank you, Frank

Comment from Ross E Silke

Excellent

Pretty gory stuff; you describe it all very well in full detail. I like the end thought of not ordering out to add a bit of humour. You develop the scene well and it's easy to read--flows well.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thank you, Ross

Comment from Rachel Joyce

Good

this poem was written well, and it had a good rhyming scheme. I suppose it just was not my style. However, overall it was a good poem. I wish you luck in the contest. God bless you.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thanks, Rachel

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is a very clever and imaginative poem, very well written as the ending finishes with a touch of humor, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thank you, kahpot

Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

If I had a six for this, I'd award it! This was a really great horror poem, but with that unexpected, comedic twist that shocked the heck out of me and made me smile. It's a bit sad that Dean isn't here to read this, because I think he would've loved it too. Thanks for a fabulous horror story poem, and for that ending that I'm still smiling about. Good luck in the voting!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thank you, GMC, I really appreciate your kind review.

Comment from Elon Vaughn

Good

I really shouldn't comment on this, because I am not fond of gore, but my grandsons thrive on it. Blood and guts. Your point is well taken. I'm not sure I could write about horror, so I admire your writing.

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thank you, Elon

Comment from January L'Angelle

Exceptional

I'm still laughing!!! This is gruesome and hilarious at the same time. I absolutely love it! "my face, my feet... he's nuts!" WOW! You are amazingly funny. I'm going to tell this one to my friends it's THAT good. Well done. -January L.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thank you, January

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

This is disgustingly gruesome and hysterically funny - you split me open with laughter at the last line. I generally can't stand reading about gore and bony stumps, but when it is brief, engaging, and ultimately funny as yours is, then I can applaud your skill. I'm glad I read it.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020

Thank you, LisaMay