In House Blues
Just letting the feelings pour out.8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Don't be messing up the workshop with too much wood caressing there, Jose!! But I am glad you seem to have found lots to keep you busy.... even if it does involve some wood caressing now and again... :) :) :) Thanx so much for sharing, my friend, and best of luck to you in the contest - this is great! :) Yvette :)
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Don't be messing up the workshop with too much wood caressing there, Jose!! But I am glad you seem to have found lots to keep you busy.... even if it does involve some wood caressing now and again... :) :) :) Thanx so much for sharing, my friend, and best of luck to you in the contest - this is great! :) Yvette :)
1996 dodge ram, I'm the --> 1996 Dodge Ram; I'm the OR 1996 Dodge Ram, and I'm the
Kind'a pisses --> Kinda pisses
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Yvette. I'm glad you enjoyed this free style writing. :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well, well! Your story was a pleasure to read. Yes, we all have a story. I am honing in on...
"This bad cold of the dinosaurs is driving everyone crazy. Why do I say dinosaurs? Well, because (to my belief, it was revived in a lab and then used to reduce life forms from a part of the world.) The only problem with this is that it got out of hand."
There are so many scenarios that would answer this question. 1. The Hong Kong Protests 2. North Korean power struggle 3. Iranians provocative behavior?????????????????? So many!
NB: The end of paragraph 1. Did you mean complete. Also, a few more misplaced words need editing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Well, well! Your story was a pleasure to read. Yes, we all have a story. I am honing in on...
"This bad cold of the dinosaurs is driving everyone crazy. Why do I say dinosaurs? Well, because (to my belief, it was revived in a lab and then used to reduce life forms from a part of the world.) The only problem with this is that it got out of hand."
There are so many scenarios that would answer this question. 1. The Hong Kong Protests 2. North Korean power struggle 3. Iranians provocative behavior?????????????????? So many!
NB: The end of paragraph 1. Did you mean complete. Also, a few more misplaced words need editing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Raffaelina. Glad to see you enjoyed this raving write from me. :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
It may not be perfect but you wrote what is going on since the pandemic began. And that is the requirements and nothing more. So keep writing and keep telling your story. Best wishes in the contest.
Drew
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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It may not be perfect but you wrote what is going on since the pandemic began. And that is the requirements and nothing more. So keep writing and keep telling your story. Best wishes in the contest.
Drew
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Drew. Sorry about the date, having problems keeping my mind on line
Comment from aryr
Wow, Jose, just wow. Good luck with the contest. I really enjoyed what you wrote because it gave a little more insight to you and yours. I agree that times are tough for everyone but in your case you have been through the trials and tribulations and you are indeed surviving. Maybe going a little cabin crazy like all of us but surviving. Be well, be safe.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Wow, Jose, just wow. Good luck with the contest. I really enjoyed what you wrote because it gave a little more insight to you and yours. I agree that times are tough for everyone but in your case you have been through the trials and tribulations and you are indeed surviving. Maybe going a little cabin crazy like all of us but surviving. Be well, be safe.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Alie. Yeah, I know everyone is going cabin crazy but we'll pull through.
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You are most welcome Jose, be well, be safe and yes we will survive.
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there. Thank you for sharing your story.
Just letting the feelings pour out is probably the best thing to do! I highly recommend it! Very refreshing story on life and what we are all facing in the world today. Good to hear stories from others on the other side of the world. Very well written and well done. Best of luck. Lourens
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi there. Thank you for sharing your story.
Just letting the feelings pour out is probably the best thing to do! I highly recommend it! Very refreshing story on life and what we are all facing in the world today. Good to hear stories from others on the other side of the world. Very well written and well done. Best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Lourens glad to know you. Take care of yourself and your loved ones across the pond. :)
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I really like the way that the voice of the narrator comes across so strongly, yet so genuinely. The characters you create are likeable and believable. Very well done!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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I really like the way that the voice of the narrator comes across so strongly, yet so genuinely. The characters you create are likeable and believable. Very well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Anya. The world has stories to tell all one has to do is share them. :) Take care of yourself and your loved ones.
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All the best to you too!
Comment from Sally Law
I don't mind a truthful ramble. I was just thinking of you. I'm not feeling too good and got up to check my post for today. I'm glad you're okay. Survival mode is what it's about. I'm so sorry about your back. I'm praying for us all. Our business has been closed three weeks. Our grandchildren were symptomatic but much better now. :)
Life is my main concern. I write to relieve stress and encourage others and myself. We applied for government assistance with our small business, but the account ran dry. The Dems are dragging to refill it. I think they just want to make the Prez look bad instead of helping hurting Americans. Jackson is working to see what we can do business wise on the other side of this. I'm on blindness disability.
I published my book just in time for the pandemic. (Just that alone will be a party icebreaker.) God is with us, dear poet. Don't forget that. If you are bored, I have a new chapter in my novel just up. I also had a love story from last week you and Mrs. Jose might like. Letters From Heaven's Gateway Six.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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I don't mind a truthful ramble. I was just thinking of you. I'm not feeling too good and got up to check my post for today. I'm glad you're okay. Survival mode is what it's about. I'm so sorry about your back. I'm praying for us all. Our business has been closed three weeks. Our grandchildren were symptomatic but much better now. :)
Life is my main concern. I write to relieve stress and encourage others and myself. We applied for government assistance with our small business, but the account ran dry. The Dems are dragging to refill it. I think they just want to make the Prez look bad instead of helping hurting Americans. Jackson is working to see what we can do business wise on the other side of this. I'm on blindness disability.
I published my book just in time for the pandemic. (Just that alone will be a party icebreaker.) God is with us, dear poet. Don't forget that. If you are bored, I have a new chapter in my novel just up. I also had a love story from last week you and Mrs. Jose might like. Letters From Heaven's Gateway Six.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Sally and sorry I'm late. I want to write and make someone smile. Problem is I need one too. Take care of yourself and your loved ones. Don't worry none like you wrote, God is with us. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yes this sounds like a true story, and many of us had been caught with un-payed mortgages, big loans, uncertainty about what tomorrow will bring. I hope good times will come soon and we can go on with our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Yes this sounds like a true story, and many of us had been caught with un-payed mortgages, big loans, uncertainty about what tomorrow will bring. I hope good times will come soon and we can go on with our lives. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you Iza. It's true and there are many stories that will be left unsaid. Take care of yourself and your loved ones. :)
