Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Red Sky"na-po-wri-mo contest
14 total reviews
Comment from Ogden
Are you absolutely sure it was that sexy sky, not guy, that captured your lonely heart?
Sometimes, it doesn't take much to make that jump. ;-)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Are you absolutely sure it was that sexy sky, not guy, that captured your lonely heart?
Sometimes, it doesn't take much to make that jump. ;-)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Dear Don, Thank you for your review. Dove
Comment from Puzzle
Oh wow. That is awesome. I LOVE all colored skies. They are just so majestic and wonderful. I'm glad you chose this material to write about. You did a really good job.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Oh wow. That is awesome. I LOVE all colored skies. They are just so majestic and wonderful. I'm glad you chose this material to write about. You did a really good job.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Dear Puzzle, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all seventeen syllables to convey a message about the power of the sunset--its colors, its significance of day's end with promise of sunrise.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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You have made excellent use of all seventeen syllables to convey a message about the power of the sunset--its colors, its significance of day's end with promise of sunrise.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Dear Janice, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from susand3022
Hi Dovemarie, I liked this 5-7-5 rendering of the blood-red sky... it makes me think about the poem about the sea. Red sky in morning, sailors take warning, red sky at night, sailors delight! :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Dovemarie, I liked this 5-7-5 rendering of the blood-red sky... it makes me think about the poem about the sea. Red sky in morning, sailors take warning, red sky at night, sailors delight! :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Dear susand3022, Thank you for your review. That expression was what I was thinking of too when I wrote it. Dove
Comment from sandy montgomery
I liked your poem very much. A blood red sky can be quite striking. I know why you used the colors you did. They make sense but the red and yellow aren't the easiest read. I thought your satori was great though. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I liked your poem very much. A blood red sky can be quite striking. I know why you used the colors you did. They make sense but the red and yellow aren't the easiest read. I thought your satori was great though. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Dear Sandy, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I just love it when the sky 'glows' like that -- it is such an awesome sight, isn't it!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, my lady, and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Oh, I just love it when the sky 'glows' like that -- it is such an awesome sight, isn't it!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, my lady, and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Dear Yvette, thank you for your review. and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from samandlancelot
Dove Marie,
Sometimes those unexpected sunsets can take your breath away and make your heart jump, as you so succinctly captured in your 5-7-5 poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dove Marie,
Sometimes those unexpected sunsets can take your breath away and make your heart jump, as you so succinctly captured in your 5-7-5 poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Hi Patricia, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Raul, Thanks for your compliments and review. Dove
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You're welcome.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I live in the desert and I understand about looking at the red sky. I do it often, living in the west. This poem is gorgeous and really depicts the sunset so well. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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I live in the desert and I understand about looking at the red sky. I do it often, living in the west. This poem is gorgeous and really depicts the sunset so well. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear January, thanks for your compliments and review. Let me take a guess. Do you live in Arizona? That state always reminds me of desert and red skies, though I've never been there. Dove
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Northern Nevada. (NOT southern Las Vegas, 500 miles away)
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest about the beautiful red sunset. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Donna, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest about the beautiful red sunset. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Teri, thanks for your compliments and review and best wishes. Blessings, Donna