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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "(new leaf on a tree)"An artful mix of poetic forms.
26 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely haiku and tie of new life into the Spring season! :) the whole presentation itself, Janet, is a cool idea for a personalized 'baby congrats' card! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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What a lovely haiku and tie of new life into the Spring season! :) the whole presentation itself, Janet, is a cool idea for a personalized 'baby congrats' card! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Your wonderful comments are received appreciatively, Yvette. I always value your opinion. Thank you so much! xo Janet
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
a family tree is very meaningful. What a wonderful gift, a daughter born in the spring. I guess no matter what time of year they are born, it is wonderful gift of life.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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a family tree is very meaningful. What a wonderful gift, a daughter born in the spring. I guess no matter what time of year they are born, it is wonderful gift of life.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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My children are both grown up now. They were winter and spring babies. How can time pass so quickly? Thank you for this truly appreciated review, my friend! xo
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are joyous, clear and creative. I like the joyful
feeling I had when reading the words of this poem. The artwork is
great and goes well with this poem. Have a good week - be well and safe.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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The author's words are joyous, clear and creative. I like the joyful
feeling I had when reading the words of this poem. The artwork is
great and goes well with this poem. Have a good week - be well and safe.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm happy to know you enjoyed reading this. :-)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding the fascinating artwork of your literal, family tree. I admired your comparing the infant to a new leaf in this 5-7-5 haiku. Enjoy her and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for adding the fascinating artwork of your literal, family tree. I admired your comparing the infant to a new leaf in this 5-7-5 haiku. Enjoy her and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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I appreciate your uplifting comments so much, Joan. I really had fun doing the artwork. Stay safe, my friend! --Janet
Comment from Cindy Decker
Very nice haiku. The arrival of a new leaf (baby) on a tree, as in family tree is very sweet! Nice photo. Congratulations! Well wishes. Good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Very nice haiku. The arrival of a new leaf (baby) on a tree, as in family tree is very sweet! Nice photo. Congratulations! Well wishes. Good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you greatly, Cindy, for the super review. I'm glad you like my artwork, too...I enjoy doing it as much as writing the poetry. That's sure a cute little dog in your picture! :-) Janet
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You?re welcome Janet. And Thank you, The photo is my mixed breed, Ruby. ! Have a great day.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the new leaf on the family tree each time a new baby is born the leaves increase and everyone has a special place .
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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A very well-written haiku about the new leaf on the family tree each time a new baby is born the leaves increase and everyone has a special place .
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Sandra. Your comments are very meaningful and appreciated!
Comment from smileycloud
what a beautiful spring gift
the tree branches flourish with loving care
congratulations
three children....lovely
blessings
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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what a beautiful spring gift
the tree branches flourish with loving care
congratulations
three children....lovely
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your positive review and comments. I truly appreciate them. Smiles and joy!
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely poem. I was a Spring baby too, so I identify with this writing. This poem is simple, easy to understand, and should do well in the Haiku contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely poem. I was a Spring baby too, so I identify with this writing. This poem is simple, easy to understand, and should do well in the Haiku contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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I'm so glad to know you related to this, and your positive review is truly appreciated!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this creatively composed, touching piece celebrating a new "branch" on that really special tree.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this creatively composed, touching piece celebrating a new "branch" on that really special tree.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your super review, Janice. I truly appreciate your supportive comments. Stay safe!
Comment from BeasPeas
An excellent job on this clever haiku with wording that is exceptional. It's hard to write these short ones, especially haiku. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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An excellent job on this clever haiku with wording that is exceptional. It's hard to write these short ones, especially haiku. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thank you greatly, Marilyn. I had a lot of fun doing the tree! :-)
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Yes, I forgot to mention the tree. Great combo with the poem and the art. :)
