Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Vandalized!"na-po-wri-mo contest
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Comment from Joseph Registrato
challenging to write poems with these restrictive rules about structure, line length all these other things. I have no ear for it. This one has me sniffing around the for smell of the gasoline or whatever they used to set it on fire.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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challenging to write poems with these restrictive rules about structure, line length all these other things. I have no ear for it. This one has me sniffing around the for smell of the gasoline or whatever they used to set it on fire.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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What would you suggest that I do to improve this septolet?
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, An interesting Septolet... thanks for the Author's notes... may I ask... how was he suppose to attend to the car if he was in the store? And who would do that??? Did they ever catch who did it? Find out why?
A fine entry... Good luck! :)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Hello Author, An interesting Septolet... thanks for the Author's notes... may I ask... how was he suppose to attend to the car if he was in the store? And who would do that??? Did they ever catch who did it? Find out why?
A fine entry... Good luck! :)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Dear susand3022, Thank you for your review. I think my brother left the area with his friends while he parked the car in the store parking lot. The store was closed, this happened late at night. No, they never found out who did it.