Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Christ's Cross"na-po-wri-mo contest
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Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I think this is a really clever and imaginative use of the form. Each word is made to count and earn its place in the poem. I particularly like the lack of punctuation, it gives it a circular feel so after the redemption we're back at the start and the reasons for that redemption.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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I think this is a really clever and imaginative use of the form. Each word is made to count and earn its place in the poem. I particularly like the lack of punctuation, it gives it a circular feel so after the redemption we're back at the start and the reasons for that redemption.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Dear Whodunnit, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your 3-6-9 poem is deeply spiritual and vividly descriptive. You have movingly described the Cross, the Father and His will, and the Son and His willing sacrifice.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Your 3-6-9 poem is deeply spiritual and vividly descriptive. You have movingly described the Cross, the Father and His will, and the Son and His willing sacrifice.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Dear Janice, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
