Early Morning
Magic time before sunrise2 total reviews
Comment from L.L.M
Hi. I have not attempted a septolet poem and was keen to read yours. Beautiful in its simplicity, and captured that moment just before sunrise perfectly. Well written and best of luck. Lourens Lukas
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Hi. I have not attempted a septolet poem and was keen to read yours. Beautiful in its simplicity, and captured that moment just before sunrise perfectly. Well written and best of luck. Lourens Lukas
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thanks for read, wonder why only a good after your comments.
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Pleasure...4 stars is excellent not good.
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No, I believe four stars is good. Five stars is excellent and six stars is exceptional. Any way thanks for the read.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-You have written a
good poem with
effective imagery.
-I like how you set
the mood and tone
in the opening
with "silent stillness."
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-You have written a
good poem with
effective imagery.
-I like how you set
the mood and tone
in the opening
with "silent stillness."
-A good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thanks for your read and comments.
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You are welcome.