Contrasts in Nature
A septolet entry6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lovely septolet offering that paints a picture for the mind in both sound and sight... and a rainbow to top off the 'hope' of the day!! :) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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A lovely septolet offering that paints a picture for the mind in both sound and sight... and a rainbow to top off the 'hope' of the day!! :) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Glad you dropped by today to share your positive thoughts!
Comment from Anya Trofimova
The form of this poem really works well to enhance its overall effect. I really like the way that there is physical white space on the page between the two descriptions. Very well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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The form of this poem really works well to enhance its overall effect. I really like the way that there is physical white space on the page between the two descriptions. Very well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
This is a nicely written poem. The image is great and the picture is well suited too. This is a new style poem for me and looks like creative fun. The first part is made up of ever more powerful tiers of image sentences, storm, darkening, suddenly and the second part is a softening of: filters, drops, and reigns. giovanni
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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This is a nicely written poem. The image is great and the picture is well suited too. This is a new style poem for me and looks like creative fun. The first part is made up of ever more powerful tiers of image sentences, storm, darkening, suddenly and the second part is a softening of: filters, drops, and reigns. giovanni
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece and actually felt the contrast I attempted to create with the words. Thank you!
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y/w giovanni
Comment from Joseph Registrato
Again, these restrictions on poems are for a purpose I do not understand. But here, at least I can figure out what's intended and it is clear and concise.
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Again, these restrictions on poems are for a purpose I do not understand. But here, at least I can figure out what's intended and it is clear and concise.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
Comment from Puzzle
This is beautiful. I love storms and rain and then the clearing after. Your layout is gorgeous as well. This follows the instructions well and is written well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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This is beautiful. I love storms and rain and then the clearing after. Your layout is gorgeous as well. This follows the instructions well and is written well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this septolet!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
gorgeous image. The words are very captivating. I can see the sun peaking through the dark skies and suddenly a burst of raindrops fall upon the yellow blossoms in the field.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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gorgeous image. The words are very captivating. I can see the sun peaking through the dark skies and suddenly a burst of raindrops fall upon the yellow blossoms in the field.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this septolet!