Old Man Pottery
a contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Wow!!! Your poem was kind of funny, and I really enjoyed some humor. I also liked the picture. I goes well with your poem. The poem sounded kind of like a really short story, another thing I liked. Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Wow!!! Your poem was kind of funny, and I really enjoyed some humor. I also liked the picture. I goes well with your poem. The poem sounded kind of like a really short story, another thing I liked. Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a blessed Sunday.
Blessings...
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You're welcome
Comment from RodG
You're having lots of fun with this lottery--even in giving the day of Tom's death. One wonders if Wifey found the ticket after the exhumation. The note also made me chuckle. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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You're having lots of fun with this lottery--even in giving the day of Tom's death. One wonders if Wifey found the ticket after the exhumation. The note also made me chuckle. Rod
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you kindly...
Comment from Drew Delaney
He lies/ Here lies
A fun epitaph that is witty! The only thing is that in 1926, there were no lotteries. It could be 2016, and still have the same effect. Nice work! Best wishes in the contest!
Drew
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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He lies/ Here lies
A fun epitaph that is witty! The only thing is that in 1926, there were no lotteries. It could be 2016, and still have the same effect. Nice work! Best wishes in the contest!
Drew
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Drew,
Thank you kindly for your review and for bringing the errors to my attention...
