Satan's Lament
Overcoming The Ultimate Temptation.11 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Satan tempted Eve by one word, "not". "You shall not surely die. From then on mankind has been subject to the curse. How different things would be if only Eve had listened.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Satan tempted Eve by one word, "not". "You shall not surely die. From then on mankind has been subject to the curse. How different things would be if only Eve had listened.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Blessings Rebecca and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I'its up to us now to listen and believe the word of God. Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you shall be saved.( Acts 16:31)
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You are exactly right.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the powerful message conveyed in this. He will indeed tempt us after we've left him and the scales being removed from our eyes, embrace truth. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I love the powerful message conveyed in this. He will indeed tempt us after we've left him and the scales being removed from our eyes, embrace truth. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings Jeffrey and thank you for you insightful review and excellent rating.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You certainly have it right. This is a well-written poem of meaning. The temptations go on, but so does our saving grace keep us from submitting to the lure.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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You certainly have it right. This is a well-written poem of meaning. The temptations go on, but so does our saving grace keep us from submitting to the lure.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings Raffaelina, thank you for your excellent rating and review. You're right the lure is always out there but so is the cure, God's word.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about satan's ability to deceive the human to make them believe they are doing the right thing in the way he know how to find our most vulnerable side.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about satan's ability to deceive the human to make them believe they are doing the right thing in the way he know how to find our most vulnerable side.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings Sandra and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I appreciate the time you took to read.
Comment from Puzzle
Yes this is true! I like your take on the original biblical story. This is written well and flows nice. It is correct in the format of the contest! I enjoyed it. Good job!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Yes this is true! I like your take on the original biblical story. This is written well and flows nice. It is correct in the format of the contest! I enjoyed it. Good job!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings and thank you so much for your excellent review and rating.
Comment from Cindy Decker
A lovely point of view seeing how Satan "feels" when we are saved. This is a very powerful message. For Satan rues discord and destruction, as you write. I like your symbolic photo accompaniment. Very good work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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A lovely point of view seeing how Satan "feels" when we are saved. This is a very powerful message. For Satan rues discord and destruction, as you write. I like your symbolic photo accompaniment. Very good work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings Cindy and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I don't think Satan laments the fact that he loses any soul, but he laments the fact that every soul lost reminds him that his end is drawing nearer day by day and his desperation comes from knowing that his time are short.
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Thank you for your enlightening words.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this very well written poem about refusing to disregard the truth of God's word any longer. That is true that God's word is and always will be the truth by which we need to live. Bill
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Great job with this very well written poem about refusing to disregard the truth of God's word any longer. That is true that God's word is and always will be the truth by which we need to live. Bill
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings Bill, I'm glad you agree, by his word is the only way to live!
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
I have read several poems with this theme "temptation". Yours is by far the best. Poetically it is a gem. The message is clear and (of course!) God's Word prevails over the shrieks of Satan.
Reading your poem is a privilege, Roy. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I have read several poems with this theme "temptation". Yours is by far the best. Poetically it is a gem. The message is clear and (of course!) God's Word prevails over the shrieks of Satan.
Reading your poem is a privilege, Roy. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings and thank you for your wonderful review and rating. And yes, God's word will prevail!
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welcome
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I really like the repetition in this poem. It is a very moving write with an effective choice of form and style. There is something wonderful(ly sad) about being 'Dead to the sun'. Well done and thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I really like the repetition in this poem. It is a very moving write with an effective choice of form and style. There is something wonderful(ly sad) about being 'Dead to the sun'. Well done and thank you for sharing!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Blessings Anya and thank your for such a wonderful review and rating.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from GE Parson
My Beloved friend in Christ, such a writing as this, in my mind earns a 6 and more. You and I are on the same page walking in fellowship going the same direction to the same Eternal abode.
"If any man be in Christ he is a new creature, old things have passed away and behold all things are become new."
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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My Beloved friend in Christ, such a writing as this, in my mind earns a 6 and more. You and I are on the same page walking in fellowship going the same direction to the same Eternal abode.
"If any man be in Christ he is a new creature, old things have passed away and behold all things are become new."
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Amen and Amen! I am so glad to find a fellow believer of the same mind and Spirit. Thank you for your review and exceptional rating, all honor and glory to Jesus.
