Sealed with a Kiss
A lifetime before us.7 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
There is nothing like soft sweet romance ending in a marriage proposal. This should do well as an entry in the Light and Sweet writing contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
There is nothing like soft sweet romance ending in a marriage proposal. This should do well as an entry in the Light and Sweet writing contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thanks much for taking the time to read and your encouraging comments.
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My pleasure.
Comment from susand3022
Light AND oh SOOO SWEET!!! I'm all a-flutter fluffernutter! LOL This is a really sweet love poem!!! I adore it and I'm all kinds of sad that I haven't got a 6 for it! Great progression and it draws a lovely picture all on its own. Best of luck! :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
Light AND oh SOOO SWEET!!! I'm all a-flutter fluffernutter! LOL This is a really sweet love poem!!! I adore it and I'm all kinds of sad that I haven't got a 6 for it! Great progression and it draws a lovely picture all on its own. Best of luck! :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your read and kind comments.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
I enjoyed this tender romantic piece. It was charming without being maudlin. The words flowed smoothly, delicately. Nice work!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
I enjoyed this tender romantic piece. It was charming without being maudlin. The words flowed smoothly, delicately. Nice work!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your read and kind comments.
Comment from Anya Trofimova
A great poem that explores deep feeling vividly and movingly, and captures such a special moment! Would love to read more of your work soon and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
A great poem that explores deep feeling vividly and movingly, and captures such a special moment! Would love to read more of your work soon and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging comments.
Comment from Joseph Registrato
the words on the page...everything must come through the senses. you only have five... sight, touch, taste, smell, hear.... it's got to come through the senses.... thoughts are abstractions.... not through the senses.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
the words on the page...everything must come through the senses. you only have five... sight, touch, taste, smell, hear.... it's got to come through the senses.... thoughts are abstractions.... not through the senses.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Don't understand your statement.
Comment from Bill Pinder
You have definitely created the image of genuine love between a couple who is ready to get married. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this writing and good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
You have definitely created the image of genuine love between a couple who is ready to get married. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this writing and good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the read and your comments.
Comment from Drew Delaney
A lovely and light sweet romance and so innocent. I love that kind of romance where the love is young, with a dream of a lifelong love ahead. Best wishes.
Drew
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
A lovely and light sweet romance and so innocent. I love that kind of romance where the love is young, with a dream of a lifelong love ahead. Best wishes.
Drew
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your read and comments.