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Sealed with a Kiss

A lifetime before us.

7 total reviews 
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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There is nothing like soft sweet romance ending in a marriage proposal. This should do well as an entry in the Light and Sweet writing contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
    Thanks much for taking the time to read and your encouraging comments.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 17-Apr-2020
    My pleasure.
Comment from susand3022
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Light AND oh SOOO SWEET!!! I'm all a-flutter fluffernutter! LOL This is a really sweet love poem!!! I adore it and I'm all kinds of sad that I haven't got a 6 for it! Great progression and it draws a lovely picture all on its own. Best of luck! :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for your read and kind comments.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
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I enjoyed this tender romantic piece. It was charming without being maudlin. The words flowed smoothly, delicately. Nice work!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your read and kind comments.
Comment from Anya Trofimova
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A great poem that explores deep feeling vividly and movingly, and captures such a special moment! Would love to read more of your work soon and best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your read and your encouraging comments.
Comment from Joseph Registrato
Needs Improvement
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the words on the page...everything must come through the senses. you only have five... sight, touch, taste, smell, hear.... it's got to come through the senses.... thoughts are abstractions.... not through the senses.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Don't understand your statement.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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You have definitely created the image of genuine love between a couple who is ready to get married. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this writing and good luck in the contest. Bill

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the read and your comments.
Comment from Drew Delaney
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A lovely and light sweet romance and so innocent. I love that kind of romance where the love is young, with a dream of a lifelong love ahead. Best wishes.
Drew

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
    Thank you for your read and comments.