Revelation of Dawn
Morning by morning, the promise renews...45 total reviews
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I think that form and rhyme of this poem suits the subject matter very well. You use very rich language skilfully to conjure up a vivid image and create an atmosphere to your work.
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I think that form and rhyme of this poem suits the subject matter very well. You use very rich language skilfully to conjure up a vivid image and create an atmosphere to your work.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your time and your review.
Comment from skyer111
Lovely and I could see the story as I was reading this poem and see the night and day in turn coming to being in this world of ours and to notice it with these worded is lovely well done
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Lovely and I could see the story as I was reading this poem and see the night and day in turn coming to being in this world of ours and to notice it with these worded is lovely well done
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments!
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
Great and excellent writing! It really makes me think about a star that shines brighter than the sun. I really like how you wrote the poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Great and excellent writing! It really makes me think about a star that shines brighter than the sun. I really like how you wrote the poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Beautiful photo and poem. The syllable count seems to be correct; your rhyme flows wonderfully. I love the last stanza especially: its splendor mine...through endless days. You have captured my feelings when life is going well. Excellent work. Well wishes.
Cindy
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Beautiful photo and poem. The syllable count seems to be correct; your rhyme flows wonderfully. I love the last stanza especially: its splendor mine...through endless days. You have captured my feelings when life is going well. Excellent work. Well wishes.
Cindy
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Revelation of the Dawn - what a perfect entry for the minute poetry. I relly like the last stanza, which is quite inspiring :T"he coming star will ever shine
Its splendor mine
With cloak ablaze
Through endless days..."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Revelation of the Dawn - what a perfect entry for the minute poetry. I relly like the last stanza, which is quite inspiring :T"he coming star will ever shine
Its splendor mine
With cloak ablaze
Through endless days..."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review! Here's wishing you a week of Beautiful mornings!!
