Revelation of Dawn
Morning by morning, the promise renews...45 total reviews
Comment from Ryan Osborn
I really enjoyed the imagery and the reflections on the promise of a new day. I also enjoyed the melodic flow of the poem. I almost wanted to sing it instead of reading it. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I really enjoyed the imagery and the reflections on the promise of a new day. I also enjoyed the melodic flow of the poem. I almost wanted to sing it instead of reading it. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Ryan! Here's wishing you a multitude of sunrise revelations in the weeks to come!
Comment from Drew Delaney
I like this and also the form.The minute poem is a lovely form and can produce such a lovely rhythm. You have done an amazing job with it. Best wishes in the contest!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I like this and also the form.The minute poem is a lovely form and can produce such a lovely rhythm. You have done an amazing job with it. Best wishes in the contest!
Drew xx
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Drew! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your minute poem is skillfully composed and delightful, conveying an appealing message about the grand appeal of the sunrise. Especially now, the sight of normal, expected events is so important.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Your minute poem is skillfully composed and delightful, conveying an appealing message about the grand appeal of the sunrise. Especially now, the sight of normal, expected events is so important.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Janice! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
Comment from zanya
Exquisite language and imagery here in this beautiful poem portraying the start of day in all its splendour and glory accompanied by a superb visual to illustrate
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Exquisite language and imagery here in this beautiful poem portraying the start of day in all its splendour and glory accompanied by a superb visual to illustrate
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Zanya! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this minute poem that is written with smooth rhyme and rhythm. I like the feeling of the sunlight's warmth that is expressed well in this creative writing. Bill
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I like this minute poem that is written with smooth rhyme and rhythm. I like the feeling of the sunlight's warmth that is expressed well in this creative writing. Bill
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Bill! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
Comment from Ross E Silke
Wow, what a wonderful smooth flowing poem you have here. The midnight blues and gold on black make it very eye catching. Your rhymes and meter are superb. I love the idea of the sun as a shining star in this. Good images and descriptions. Well done, A.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Wow, what a wonderful smooth flowing poem you have here. The midnight blues and gold on black make it very eye catching. Your rhymes and meter are superb. I love the idea of the sun as a shining star in this. Good images and descriptions. Well done, A.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Ross! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
that meets all of the requirements.
-The imagery is effective and
paints a vivid word picture
of the coming dawn and then the night.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
that meets all of the requirements.
-The imagery is effective and
paints a vivid word picture
of the coming dawn and then the night.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Pam! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Remarkable piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST of LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Hello Friend,
Remarkable piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST of LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, RP! May you have a wonderful weekend of sunrises in which to rejoice!
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Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Dawn reveals its splendour before the morning chills on the yonder hills and opens endless days; well said, well done; poet feels at the close observation of dawn at the Blue Lake Campground.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Dawn reveals its splendour before the morning chills on the yonder hills and opens endless days; well said, well done; poet feels at the close observation of dawn at the Blue Lake Campground.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A perfectly metered minute with good rhymes and sentiments and this is a joy to read, you brought the ambient scene here with your skilful words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A perfectly metered minute with good rhymes and sentiments and this is a joy to read, you brought the ambient scene here with your skilful words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A very special thank you, Dolly, for your wonderfully encouraging review and the bright stars accompanying it -- you have totally made my entire week!! ;-) Please be sure to enjoy a multitude of sunrise revelations in the coming weeks!!
