Revelation of Dawn
Morning by morning, the promise renews...45 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Revelation of Dawn
Hello my friend
I really like your poem and the beautiful presentation. The imagery is wonderful. Great entry for the Minute Poetry writing prompt.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Revelation of Dawn
Hello my friend
I really like your poem and the beautiful presentation. The imagery is wonderful. Great entry for the Minute Poetry writing prompt.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Gypsy, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from victor 66
I believe anything that gives us comfort, purpose and direction is of great value. I'm not religious nor do I intend to be, but anything that lifts a person's spirit is a good. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I believe anything that gives us comfort, purpose and direction is of great value. I'm not religious nor do I intend to be, but anything that lifts a person's spirit is a good. Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Victor, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
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You are welcome, and I wish the same for you.
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a lovely Minute poem for the contest. I loved the picture and presentation which added to the beautiful image in the poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely Minute poem for the contest. I loved the picture and presentation which added to the beautiful image in the poem.
Very nicely done.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from estory
There's a sense of the sublime, a peacefulness to this poem. The echoing rhyme effects, enhanced by the short lines and tight meter, created a ringing effect almost like churchbells on a Sunday morning. estory
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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There's a sense of the sublime, a peacefulness to this poem. The echoing rhyme effects, enhanced by the short lines and tight meter, created a ringing effect almost like churchbells on a Sunday morning. estory
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Estory, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Oh... so beautiful and mesmerizing.
Thoughtful and makes the reader ponder.
Photograph could be a postcard from where I live.
Message is timely and realistic.
Just lovely.
Best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Oh... so beautiful and mesmerizing.
Thoughtful and makes the reader ponder.
Photograph could be a postcard from where I live.
Message is timely and realistic.
Just lovely.
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Mrs. KT (wink, wink), and may you have a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is an excellent minute poem and it's the best entry i've seen for the prompt. i hope you win ^.^ best of luck in the contest :) it's really a wonderful poem :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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this is an excellent minute poem and it's the best entry i've seen for the prompt. i hope you win ^.^ best of luck in the contest :) it's really a wonderful poem :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Miranda, and may you have a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Revelation of Dawn, has the proper formatting and describes the huge promise of something big and bright that we see just before the blazing ball comes fully into view. Prepared people wait for the light of day.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This minute poem, Revelation of Dawn, has the proper formatting and describes the huge promise of something big and bright that we see just before the blazing ball comes fully into view. Prepared people wait for the light of day.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Bill, and may you have a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from royowen
The minute poem is the perfect poetic style when writing a certain message, the short sharp staccatos are the excellent vehicle of getting a message across with all the wonderful impact of the language in that theme. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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The minute poem is the perfect poetic style when writing a certain message, the short sharp staccatos are the excellent vehicle of getting a message across with all the wonderful impact of the language in that theme. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Roy, and may you have a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
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Bless you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written minute poem about the breaking of the day each morning like a revelation after the night we have a new chance to shine every day the best we can.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A very well-written minute poem about the breaking of the day each morning like a revelation after the night we have a new chance to shine every day the best we can.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, and may you have a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
I love your poem. What a clever way to express dawn and meeting the requirements of the writing prompt perfectly. The rhyme and rhythm were perfect for this piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I love your poem. What a clever way to express dawn and meeting the requirements of the writing prompt perfectly. The rhyme and rhythm were perfect for this piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, Brenda! Here's wishing you a multitude of sunrise revelations in the weeks to come!
