Revelation of Dawn
Morning by morning, the promise renews...45 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What a lovely interpretation of dawn. The harbinger, the promise, that the sun will rise, not just today, but every day. I'm so glad God gave us morning and evening!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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What a lovely interpretation of dawn. The harbinger, the promise, that the sun will rise, not just today, but every day. I'm so glad God gave us morning and evening!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Darlene, and may you find a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are convincing, engaging and creative. I really enjoyed
the uplifting message in this poem. The poem flows and connects well.
I thought about the morning light. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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The author's words are convincing, engaging and creative. I really enjoyed
the uplifting message in this poem. The poem flows and connects well.
I thought about the morning light. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review, and may you find a multitude of sunrise revelations in the coming weeks!!
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I really like how you have used the form to enhance the words. I think it flows really well and it almost makes you want to sing it as it is read. Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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I really like how you have used the form to enhance the words. I think it flows really well and it almost makes you want to sing it as it is read. Good luck with it.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from MissMerri
This is quite beautiful. Minute poems are not easy to do beautifully, in my opinion. This one succeeds on every front. The rhymes and meter are great, the theme is lovely, the presentation is perfect. Good luck in the contest. I think this will do very well. ;p
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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This is quite beautiful. Minute poems are not easy to do beautifully, in my opinion. This one succeeds on every front. The rhymes and meter are great, the theme is lovely, the presentation is perfect. Good luck in the contest. I think this will do very well. ;p
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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A very special thank you, Miss Merri, for your wonderfully encouraging review and the bright stars accompanying it -- you have totally made my entire week!! ;-) Please be sure to enjoy a multitude of sunrise revelations in the coming weeks!!
Comment from Tim Noble
Brilliant ! Lots of imagery and wonder at nature's colourful displays. Personally I am never up at dawn and therefore cannot really comment but it sounds wonderful.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Brilliant ! Lots of imagery and wonder at nature's colourful displays. Personally I am never up at dawn and therefore cannot really comment but it sounds wonderful.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Tim, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Very well done. I love how easily the content flows very smooth from your pen. as I read with interest. Best of luck in the contest and best wishes for your future works.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Very well done. I love how easily the content flows very smooth from your pen. as I read with interest. Best of luck in the contest and best wishes for your future works.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Kermit, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, I love this Minute Poem and the way it progresses through the dawning of the new day to the promise of all those to come in the future. A contender for sure! Good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Hello Author, I love this Minute Poem and the way it progresses through the dawning of the new day to the promise of all those to come in the future. A contender for sure! Good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, my beautiful friend, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks! ;)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Beautifully constructed Minute Poem that should do well in the contest. Lovely artwork and presentation gives this plenty of wow factor as well.
One tiny niggle would be 'fray' in line 2 which is not really apt for the peaceful morning you are describing. I would suggest searching for another word to get that rhyme - play, gray, spray...??
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Beautifully constructed Minute Poem that should do well in the contest. Lovely artwork and presentation gives this plenty of wow factor as well.
One tiny niggle would be 'fray' in line 2 which is not really apt for the peaceful morning you are describing. I would suggest searching for another word to get that rhyme - play, gray, spray...??
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Steve, and for your suggestion.... mulling it about, though, I'm thinking I'm gonna leave it. I do appreciate your input, though!! May you have a multitude of sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely Minute poem. The image is striking. We find encouragement and faith that new days will bring good things. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely Minute poem. The image is striking. We find encouragement and faith that new days will bring good things. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
Comment from Gail Denham
As long as we live, daylight, dawn and the sun will keep shining. Until God chooses to darken these thing s- we can cling to His promise of a new day. Nicely put,your poem of hope.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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As long as we live, daylight, dawn and the sun will keep shining. Until God chooses to darken these thing s- we can cling to His promise of a new day. Nicely put,your poem of hope.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review, Gail, and may you have a multitude of such sunrise revelations over the coming weeks!!
