NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Big Evil Grin"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh what an interesting poem, Alicia. You never cease to amaze with your creativity. I agree with you here--ditch the guy. Not a good prospect at all. Your author's note reflects when a man is not a "keeper." Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Oh what an interesting poem, Alicia. You never cease to amaze with your creativity. I agree with you here--ditch the guy. Not a good prospect at all. Your author's note reflects when a man is not a "keeper." Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
I had not heard of the song that inspired you to write this poem, but you had me with the time and I was intrigued by your story particularly during the pandemic. You make it clear that sometimes it is better to be alone. Be strong- Joan
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I had not heard of the song that inspired you to write this poem, but you had me with the time and I was intrigued by your story particularly during the pandemic. You make it clear that sometimes it is better to be alone. Be strong- Joan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I really like the use of sound and repetition in this poem to make it come to life. The references you use give the text a more subtle, deeper meaning. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I really like the use of sound and repetition in this poem to make it come to life. The references you use give the text a more subtle, deeper meaning. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hi! Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
Boy! This is a very active song, does this reflect anything that has happened to you Alicia. This is incredible. Very active, it would suit the backing on the first video clip, very very good, loved this, a lot of effort went into it. Well done, Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Boy! This is a very active song, does this reflect anything that has happened to you Alicia. This is incredible. Very active, it would suit the backing on the first video clip, very very good, loved this, a lot of effort went into it. Well done, Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hi Roy! It is just a song. I probably dated someone with that personality in the past. There must be reason for me being single still... Finding a life with love for a husband and child is always the plan. You're nice. Thank you. God bless :)
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I hope that happens
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written song/poem about an evil grin a boyfriend deserve because of his very bad behaviour. We cannot let others misuse our kindness.
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I thought my heart was broken too(to) pieces
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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A very well-written song/poem about an evil grin a boyfriend deserve because of his very bad behaviour. We cannot let others misuse our kindness.
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I thought my heart was broken too(to) pieces
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hi! I appreciate the edit note. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
Well, thanks for introducing me to music I never heard before. It sounds rather loud and has a really fast beat. Can you dance to something that fast?
I'm not sure if he gave such a "big evil grin" and laughed so much, I don't think I'd trust the guy.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Well, thanks for introducing me to music I never heard before. It sounds rather loud and has a really fast beat. Can you dance to something that fast?
I'm not sure if he gave such a "big evil grin" and laughed so much, I don't think I'd trust the guy.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hi! You're nice. I use to dance. Not good, but enough to get into a club. Lolz. Thank you :)
