Sentimental Sojourn
Journey to a private oasis . . .18 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
It's quite a lovely poem you've written. And your garden looks delightful. So what if anyone thinks it's odd that you set the table for two? If it suits your fancy, embrace it. I'm sorry that lonely walks are made in despair, but it sounds as though most of your time in your garden is very pleasant. Enjoy!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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It's quite a lovely poem you've written. And your garden looks delightful. So what if anyone thinks it's odd that you set the table for two? If it suits your fancy, embrace it. I'm sorry that lonely walks are made in despair, but it sounds as though most of your time in your garden is very pleasant. Enjoy!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello Mary Kay,
Thank you for taking a virtual walk with me.
- Lobber
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You're very welcome, Lobber. My pleasure. - Mary Kay
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a picture of a lovely enclosure and I take it, your sanctuary. It is good that it is just a few steps away, for your condition, whatever it is. Your presentation with your artful poem is stellar.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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This is a picture of a lovely enclosure and I take it, your sanctuary. It is good that it is just a few steps away, for your condition, whatever it is. Your presentation with your artful poem is stellar.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello Raffaelina,
Thank you for stopping by and taking a virtual walk through my garden.
- Lobber
Comment from Anya Trofimova
This is a great poem that vividly captures a moment and a plethora of emotions! I really love the way that you use the rhyme scheme to give flow and musicality to your work. Very well done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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This is a great poem that vividly captures a moment and a plethora of emotions! I really love the way that you use the rhyme scheme to give flow and musicality to your work. Very well done!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hello Anya,
Thank you for taking a virtual and musical walk through my garden. I?m a trained musician.
- Lobber
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You are very welcome! big smiles
Comment from Rylie McBride
First off, I am a fan of poems that use a variety of punctuation throughout the poem and you did a fabulous job with that! I think all your rhyming couplets worked well together. Good luck in the contest! I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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First off, I am a fan of poems that use a variety of punctuation throughout the poem and you did a fabulous job with that! I think all your rhyming couplets worked well together. Good luck in the contest! I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hi Rylie,
Thank you for taking a virtual walk through my garden.
- Lobber
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this poem about your private garden spot. Sorry you are dealing with medical issues. Hopefully things don't get as far advanced as the American revolution part two. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill
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I like this poem about your private garden spot. Sorry you are dealing with medical issues. Hopefully things don't get as far advanced as the American revolution part two. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Lovely and hard breaking poem, but you left the hope to take the center of your poem :"The table's set for two you see;
Most think it's quite an oddity.
I always eat and dine alone.
I do meet friends, but on the phone."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Lovely and hard breaking poem, but you left the hope to take the center of your poem :"The table's set for two you see;
Most think it's quite an oddity.
I always eat and dine alone.
I do meet friends, but on the phone."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Raul1
You did really well with this take a photo contest. It meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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You did really well with this take a photo contest. It meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A pleasant poem and nice description of the garden. Seems you can walk the plank on the walk to nowhere. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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A pleasant poem and nice description of the garden. Seems you can walk the plank on the walk to nowhere. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
