Reviews from

Going Home

Contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a romantic poem that is sweet and true. We look to love to make us feel whole and worthy in someone's eyes. A fine entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from RodG
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

There are many who often feel lost and floundering until they discover someone who loves them. I really like the extended implied metaphor of a ship floundering against rocks until a beacon provides light--and love.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

When love is dire and deep, this sort of experience through feeling of love attraction that shows the way or path to home; well said, well done; wish you good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
    Thank you!