Daily Decisions
Realize that even the small ones affect your direction...23 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
Life choices have to be well thought out, otherwise you can easily lose your way. What is important in life is to consider small things as important as big things but not to underestimate them as they will always be fundamental and necessary. Life is short and must be valued and cherished especially if you are two or more in the family. This Tetractys contest writing prompt entry is perfectly written and set within its syllables counting format and its well described narrative thematic storyline content. I have appreciated above all the "thematic subject of the poem" and the key words of the poem "nimbly molds" including the "m" sound. A great work.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Life choices have to be well thought out, otherwise you can easily lose your way. What is important in life is to consider small things as important as big things but not to underestimate them as they will always be fundamental and necessary. Life is short and must be valued and cherished especially if you are two or more in the family. This Tetractys contest writing prompt entry is perfectly written and set within its syllables counting format and its well described narrative thematic storyline content. I have appreciated above all the "thematic subject of the poem" and the key words of the poem "nimbly molds" including the "m" sound. A great work.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Wow, Tony!! This is such an awesome review, sir -- thank you so much for your wonderful comments here ... and those stars will help the rain be a bit less of a 'bummer'... ;) :)
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You are Always welcomed , dear Yvette above all in this particular part of our life time. Thank you for our friendship cultural being. Blessings from Italy and above all from Tony
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What a beautiful presentation. Your message is superb. Every little decision bears much thought since it will be a part of your future. We never know how wide the fan will stretch.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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What a beautiful presentation. Your message is superb. Every little decision bears much thought since it will be a part of your future. We never know how wide the fan will stretch.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'shortie', Ralf - have a wonderful week, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Blessings and thank you for sharing this wonderfully written Tetractys. The wisdom expressed by your words creates yet another path, or choice for the reader to take, in light of having read it. The image formed by the text also takes shape as another path to choose from beneath the other paths shown in the image above it. I wish you well in this contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Blessings and thank you for sharing this wonderfully written Tetractys. The wisdom expressed by your words creates yet another path, or choice for the reader to take, in light of having read it. The image formed by the text also takes shape as another path to choose from beneath the other paths shown in the image above it. I wish you well in this contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Frank -- good of you to drop by today for the review! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message conveyed in this. You're absolutely right. The choice once made and followed through as you've so eloquently stated will result in positive or negative results. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I like the message conveyed in this. You're absolutely right. The choice once made and followed through as you've so eloquently stated will result in positive or negative results. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey!!
Comment from Anya Trofimova
This is a very well-written and well-presented poem. Really emphasises how every choice is followed by a consequence! Thank you for sharing and well done!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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This is a very well-written and well-presented poem. Really emphasises how every choice is followed by a consequence! Thank you for sharing and well done!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
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Your welcome, I look forward to reading more of your writing! If you have a minute you can check our my latest entries Mother's Daughter and In the face of angels. Both need a couple of tweaks here and there...
Comment from Lobber
The author uses lots of alliteration and )shape( to make for enjoyable read...similar to The Road Not Taken by R. Frost ... I like future footsteps.
- Lobber
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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The author uses lots of alliteration and )shape( to make for enjoyable read...similar to The Road Not Taken by R. Frost ... I like future footsteps.
- Lobber
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Lobber, for your review - always great to hear from you!!
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your poem and the presentation is great. You have met the guidelines and I did not see any errors. You did a wonderful job. Take care and stay well. Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I like your poem and the presentation is great. You have met the guidelines and I did not see any errors. You did a wonderful job. Take care and stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Shirley, for your review - always great to hear from you!!
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I like this, the third line in particular. I was having a discussion yesterday about how even small choices can have bigger lasting impacts. I think this line really expresses that it is small nimble choices that can mould our path.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I like this, the third line in particular. I was having a discussion yesterday about how even small choices can have bigger lasting impacts. I think this line really expresses that it is small nimble choices that can mould our path.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much - great to hear from you!!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Very nice poem. Your syllable count is good and the photo is pertinent. I like the meaning of your poem; we have all made hard choices in life. Well wishes. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Very nice poem. Your syllable count is good and the photo is pertinent. I like the meaning of your poem; we have all made hard choices in life. Well wishes. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Cindy, for your review!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed. Put one foot in front of the other and keep on trekking toward the goal. A positive message. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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This is very nicely composed. Put one foot in front of the other and keep on trekking toward the goal. A positive message. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and your comments.