Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Poetic Lullaby Dream"na-po-wri-mo contest
5 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
This is a poem of wonder, of slumber, of midnight sweet dreams. I like it so very much because I can imagine myself the lucky sleeper. What a delightful accompanying photo you chose to illustrate an already inspiring poem. The muse is strong.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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This is a poem of wonder, of slumber, of midnight sweet dreams. I like it so very much because I can imagine myself the lucky sleeper. What a delightful accompanying photo you chose to illustrate an already inspiring poem. The muse is strong.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2020
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Dear Marilyn Lou, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I really like the lyrical nature of this poem, which comes across through words such as 'soul'. I like how the poem comes in waves (created through the three stanzas) almost as a dream does.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I really like the lyrical nature of this poem, which comes across through words such as 'soul'. I like how the poem comes in waves (created through the three stanzas) almost as a dream does.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Dear Anya, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-6-9 about dreams that have at night when we are most vulnerable when we sleep. We seldom have control about what we dream and are often messages from God to warn us.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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A very well-written 3-6-9 about dreams that have at night when we are most vulnerable when we sleep. We seldom have control about what we dream and are often messages from God to warn us.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your compliment and review. Dove
Comment from Kathleen S.
This poem is quite beautiful. It would be nice if you added a picture to it, with moonlight in it for more effect... Still, it's beautiful to hear and imagine it. Great job. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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This poem is quite beautiful. It would be nice if you added a picture to it, with moonlight in it for more effect... Still, it's beautiful to hear and imagine it. Great job. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Dear Kathleen, Thank you for your review and compliments, Yes, I will add a picture. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your 3-6-9 is creatively composed and delightful. It conveys a powerful message about sleep--how it may actually engender poetry, lines we can write when we awaken, rested.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Your 3-6-9 is creatively composed and delightful. It conveys a powerful message about sleep--how it may actually engender poetry, lines we can write when we awaken, rested.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Dear Janice, thank you for your review and compliments, Dove