A short trip
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
This piece is excellent! In just fifty words you have completed a scene using dialogue, description, a logical plot, and a very amusing and unexpected ending.
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This piece is excellent! In just fifty words you have completed a scene using dialogue, description, a logical plot, and a very amusing and unexpected ending.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Janice.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute Humorous 50 Word Story contest entry with an immigration officer. That answer put the officer in his place. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a cute Humorous 50 Word Story contest entry with an immigration officer. That answer put the officer in his place. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Many thanks
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
Haha... and who said Germans don't have a sense of humour. I love it, even if it might be seen to be in bad taste by some (vee don't mention zee war.)
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Haha... and who said Germans don't have a sense of humour. I love it, even if it might be seen to be in bad taste by some (vee don't mention zee war.)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
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Many thanks. So glad you like it
Comment from Opeyemi Diamond
Lolz....she would've have just told him her occupation, at least it's only normal to be questioned. But she just wanted to wave it off. Lol.. It's quite funny cause I'm sure the officer would be surprised at that response. Thanks for sharing
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Lolz....she would've have just told him her occupation, at least it's only normal to be questioned. But she just wanted to wave it off. Lol.. It's quite funny cause I'm sure the officer would be surprised at that response. Thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
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Many thanks.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very clever story, my friend. I hate questions. I like to answer sex with yes, no or none of your business. I am disabled and that seems to be what I am supposed to give as occupation. I prefer writer, gardener, know-it-all. I have a problem with putting disabled as an occupation. It gives people the image that you just sit in front of the TV all day and don't do anything. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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A very clever story, my friend. I hate questions. I like to answer sex with yes, no or none of your business. I am disabled and that seems to be what I am supposed to give as occupation. I prefer writer, gardener, know-it-all. I have a problem with putting disabled as an occupation. It gives people the image that you just sit in front of the TV all day and don't do anything. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much Debbie for your comments. Surely being disabled is not an occupation.
