The Lord Keepth You
Come Home to The Father!51 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Forever free from the strife of this world,
and the utter grip of sin,
and the only question,
you have to ask yourself is,
'Will I let Him in?'"
I loved this especially the last stanza with a brilliant rhyme in this accomplished and beautiful poem. I love it and it brims with the beauty of true faith and the Glory of God's power. We should never forget the strength of it for he alone can move mountains as long as we believe. amazing work. kindest regards and God bless you meia x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Forever free from the strife of this world,
and the utter grip of sin,
and the only question,
you have to ask yourself is,
'Will I let Him in?'"
I loved this especially the last stanza with a brilliant rhyme in this accomplished and beautiful poem. I love it and it brims with the beauty of true faith and the Glory of God's power. We should never forget the strength of it for he alone can move mountains as long as we believe. amazing work. kindest regards and God bless you meia x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Fonda Little,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having smooth flow throughout from top to bottom, and beautifully depicting the power of trust in God.
The last but one stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture complements the theme.
Best of Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Hello Fonda Little,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having smooth flow throughout from top to bottom, and beautifully depicting the power of trust in God.
The last but one stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture complements the theme.
Best of Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
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Fonda Little, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautifully written tribute to the glory of God. Faith can change our lives, just as jesus did for us on the cross. I really enjoyed reading this, best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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This is a beautifully written tribute to the glory of God. Faith can change our lives, just as jesus did for us on the cross. I really enjoyed reading this, best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
A very good flow and rhythm to this when you're reading it. Given it's more free form this is quite hard to achieve, I think.
Some nice images and a simple, but profound message.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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A very good flow and rhythm to this when you're reading it. Given it's more free form this is quite hard to achieve, I think.
Some nice images and a simple, but profound message.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt spiritual poem about the promises of God that He will never forget those who believes in Him and trust Him to invite Him in their hearts.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt spiritual poem about the promises of God that He will never forget those who believes in Him and trust Him to invite Him in their hearts.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from sunnilicious
God is omnipresent. Jesus was a man at one time before his significant death. You know religion, because this poem was beautifully written. So you have thought a lot about church and religion. But have you thought about the lessons or values in those biblical stories. Happy Easter. God bless you :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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God is omnipresent. Jesus was a man at one time before his significant death. You know religion, because this poem was beautifully written. So you have thought a lot about church and religion. But have you thought about the lessons or values in those biblical stories. Happy Easter. God bless you :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Lord Keepth You", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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"The Lord Keepth You", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Fonda Little,
you're more than welcome.
Amen,Amen and God bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh, this is so true and so beautifully written!
What a blessing for me on this Easter Evening! I don't think there's anything to fix or change.
I love it when God just gives us words. Ive been teaching before and had the thought flash through my brain, "Wow! I hope I can remember this later, Lord! I'd like to hear it myself, and not just give it to others." I've also had a song written through me a few times where I just had no idea I was going to write one. He's so wonderful and awesome.
Thank you again for sharing!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Oh, this is so true and so beautifully written!
What a blessing for me on this Easter Evening! I don't think there's anything to fix or change.
I love it when God just gives us words. Ive been teaching before and had the thought flash through my brain, "Wow! I hope I can remember this later, Lord! I'd like to hear it myself, and not just give it to others." I've also had a song written through me a few times where I just had no idea I was going to write one. He's so wonderful and awesome.
Thank you again for sharing!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I especially like stanza 3 of this faith-centered free verse poem. I like the Christian invitations inherent in the writing. You did a good job praising the Lord. Nice author notes to help explain inspiration/motivation, too.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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I especially like stanza 3 of this faith-centered free verse poem. I like the Christian invitations inherent in the writing. You did a good job praising the Lord. Nice author notes to help explain inspiration/motivation, too.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Very well done. "So awaken oh sleeper", how many do you think are still sleeping, or just to lazy to get up and enjoy another one of God's beautiful days. Thanks for the message. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Very well done. "So awaken oh sleeper", how many do you think are still sleeping, or just to lazy to get up and enjoy another one of God's beautiful days. Thanks for the message. Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
