The Lord Keepth You
Come Home to The Father!51 total reviews
Comment from Reese Turner
Nicely written witness in this, the most Holy of seasons. I add to your prayers my own that more young people would understand and pursue a close relationship with He. Please accept an old man's salute, "I'm proud of you."
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Nicely written witness in this, the most Holy of seasons. I add to your prayers my own that more young people would understand and pursue a close relationship with He. Please accept an old man's salute, "I'm proud of you."
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your free verse is well-written. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It is presented well, too. The image and color scheme work nicely together. Your words flow smoothly with good imagery and a great and true message of faith. You are right about what and how you say/write it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Your free verse is well-written. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It is presented well, too. The image and color scheme work nicely together. Your words flow smoothly with good imagery and a great and true message of faith. You are right about what and how you say/write it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written free poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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This is a very well written free poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from forestport12
So true. He knocks on the door of our hearts. Glad to read your testimony and how you are trusting his promises. Your poem gives pause and thought to how one needs to have a personal Jesus. Keep honing your gift.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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So true. He knocks on the door of our hearts. Glad to read your testimony and how you are trusting his promises. Your poem gives pause and thought to how one needs to have a personal Jesus. Keep honing your gift.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your prayer/poem is dramatically descriptive and full of praise for our unique Savior. Witnessing to others is expected of us, of course. Then when the Holy Spirit convicts someone, he/she can be saved.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Your prayer/poem is dramatically descriptive and full of praise for our unique Savior. Witnessing to others is expected of us, of course. Then when the Holy Spirit convicts someone, he/she can be saved.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Janet Foor
"The Lord Keepeth You" is a beautiful poem with a wonderful message in a free verse format.
thank you for sharing the scriptures that inspire and support this piece.
Well done Fonda.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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"The Lord Keepeth You" is a beautiful poem with a wonderful message in a free verse format.
thank you for sharing the scriptures that inspire and support this piece.
Well done Fonda.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Ross E Silke
Wow, this is very compelling and has a lot of encouragement for the reader that there is certainly hope and your outstanding picture to accompany shows in detail the power of Christ able to set one free. Mind you I've been on the path to deliverance for years and still more to go but with Jesus ALL THINGS are possible!! Your poem is a great witness and invitation for not only the lost but those in need of God's supernatural miracles and hand to deliver one from anything that hinders. Great poem! I only suggest lower casing where you have capitalized unnecessarily to improve the correct way of formatting in the English language for sentence structure. But the poem and accompanying beautiful picture is so faith-filled and inspiring that I can't help but rate higher although a teacher might edit the capitals in your sentences. Way to go! A
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Wow, this is very compelling and has a lot of encouragement for the reader that there is certainly hope and your outstanding picture to accompany shows in detail the power of Christ able to set one free. Mind you I've been on the path to deliverance for years and still more to go but with Jesus ALL THINGS are possible!! Your poem is a great witness and invitation for not only the lost but those in need of God's supernatural miracles and hand to deliver one from anything that hinders. Great poem! I only suggest lower casing where you have capitalized unnecessarily to improve the correct way of formatting in the English language for sentence structure. But the poem and accompanying beautiful picture is so faith-filled and inspiring that I can't help but rate higher although a teacher might edit the capitals in your sentences. Way to go! A
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Cedar
Hello Fonda,
This is a very beautiful spiritual poem and the timing to post it is perfect also.
Yes, I agree with you. Especially in your last stanza, I'm sure that question will make a few stop and think about it.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Hello Fonda,
This is a very beautiful spiritual poem and the timing to post it is perfect also.
Yes, I agree with you. Especially in your last stanza, I'm sure that question will make a few stop and think about it.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from JLR
Fonda, I celebrate that you are on the road to recovery. I started my journey with Bill W 37 years ago. It a great to learn that you know.....really know the touch of God's Grace! JLR
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Fonda, I celebrate that you are on the road to recovery. I started my journey with Bill W 37 years ago. It a great to learn that you know.....really know the touch of God's Grace! JLR
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from robyn corum
Fonda,
A beautiful and worthy message. In all honesty, it reads more like a stream of consciousness thought or a conversation than a free verse poem - but the message IS a great one. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Fonda,
A beautiful and worthy message. In all honesty, it reads more like a stream of consciousness thought or a conversation than a free verse poem - but the message IS a great one. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
