Slippin' the Pink Slip
Dressing-down with a twist27 total reviews
Comment from Alli Johnston
Oh my gosh! The build up and the punchline were just fantastic. This was an excellent little script and I actually laughed out loud. Such a good humor piece
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Oh my gosh! The build up and the punchline were just fantastic. This was an excellent little script and I actually laughed out loud. Such a good humor piece
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
Comment from Sumpta
Wow, this is awesome Elizabeth. I can bet that I enjoyed every bit of the script, you wrote so well. Her mum must be very happy to hear the good news.
All the best dear.
...Assumpta.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Wow, this is awesome Elizabeth. I can bet that I enjoyed every bit of the script, you wrote so well. Her mum must be very happy to hear the good news.
All the best dear.
...Assumpta.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks for stopping by!
I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Elizabeth:
As they say, truth is stranger than fiction. I've had
friends who have written great stories based on
real events in their lives - you just had to have
known them when to recognize the real things
from the fiction. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Elizabeth:
As they say, truth is stranger than fiction. I've had
friends who have written great stories based on
real events in their lives - you just had to have
known them when to recognize the real things
from the fiction. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thanks for stopping by!
I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is so funny and well written. I feel like your cheerleader because I so like your writing. You are also your best editor. Didn't spot a single error.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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This is so funny and well written. I feel like your cheerleader because I so like your writing. You are also your best editor. Didn't spot a single error.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Carol--what a lovely ssssssurprise! Delightful payback for my review on GRAND UNCLE.
I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
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Really good job and I wonder if you have ever tried to get published. Check out Eldridge Publishing Co, Venice, FL
Comment from Marilyn Mathis
This is delightful. I love the twist at the end!
I have had a few turnabouts at work too, where I thought I was going to be criticized and instead was praised (or at least not fired)!
Your writing makes very enjoyable reading!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This is delightful. I love the twist at the end!
I have had a few turnabouts at work too, where I thought I was going to be criticized and instead was praised (or at least not fired)!
Your writing makes very enjoyable reading!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
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That's the way to write, Elizabeth! Just let the characters take over, because they will. I am writing a mystery novel and you should hear how they carry on in my brain.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author is great in the conversations of the script and the ending is both surprising and unexpected. I like it.
It was hard to accept doing something wrong but Charlene was honest to admit it to her mother. That is good.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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The author is great in the conversations of the script and the ending is both surprising and unexpected. I like it.
It was hard to accept doing something wrong but Charlene was honest to admit it to her mother. That is good.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
Comment from karenina
As an RN I thought I'd heard it ALL! This is actually the first time I've opted to read a script ... I'm impressed with how easy this is to follow and how the theme (raw as it was) did not suffer from the format...which was always my fear. Maybe there's a sitcom to be written by you yet! --Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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As an RN I thought I'd heard it ALL! This is actually the first time I've opted to read a script ... I'm impressed with how easy this is to follow and how the theme (raw as it was) did not suffer from the format...which was always my fear. Maybe there's a sitcom to be written by you yet! --Karenina
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Hollywood awaits! Thanks for another visit--stop by anytime. Thanks for taking a chance on the script.
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Good stuff! You've opened my eyes to another genre!--Karenina
Comment from royowen
Is that all I cried, she'd have to be the first nurse on record as being able to get a blood sample when drunk, when others made several attempts and failed. Very clever this script Liz, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Is that all I cried, she'd have to be the first nurse on record as being able to get a blood sample when drunk, when others made several attempts and failed. Very clever this script Liz, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I had a blast with this one!
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Well done
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Really like your story!
It's funny; has a great, unpredictable ending and the dialogue rings very true. Most writers, I find, have the most trouble with the dialogue.
Yours rang true and the talk between she and her mother was pricelessly funny.
Your writing is
"un-effin-believable! Girl--you rule!" :)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Really like your story!
It's funny; has a great, unpredictable ending and the dialogue rings very true. Most writers, I find, have the most trouble with the dialogue.
Yours rang true and the talk between she and her mother was pricelessly funny.
Your writing is
"un-effin-believable! Girl--you rule!" :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I had a blast with this one! (I don't write the dialog--I conjure my characters and scramble to write as they spew their stuff. I'm invariably astounded by what comes out of their mouths.)
Delighted by your compliment--and how cleverly you construed it. Stop by anytime! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from themundanegirl
Good Evening!
Thank you for sharing this humorous piece of work! I loved it. You did such a great job writing it. It was easy to fall into the story and become interested in what was going to happen next.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Good Evening!
Thank you for sharing this humorous piece of work! I loved it. You did such a great job writing it. It was easy to fall into the story and become interested in what was going to happen next.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by! I aim to amuse--glad I hit the funny bone! Cheers. LIZ