Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Spring Break"Eclectic mix
4 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
Thank you for this lovely poem with its vibrant colors. Spring is definitely getting overlooked this year, and it has so much inspiration to offer, particularly this year. Your tulips are gorgeous.
I hope you are doing well and staying safe.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this lovely poem with its vibrant colors. Spring is definitely getting overlooked this year, and it has so much inspiration to offer, particularly this year. Your tulips are gorgeous.
I hope you are doing well and staying safe.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Thanks Debbie, I really appreciate your support. Like others I?m stressed right out - too many irons in the fire. My fan story reviewing and writing has been greatly curtailed but stress is Parkinson?s great symptom devil. Take care and stay caring and safe
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I noticed the blossoms in the trees and you are so right, despite the virus terror, there is beauty starting to shine through. This is perfectly done 5-7-5-7-7
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I noticed the blossoms in the trees and you are so right, despite the virus terror, there is beauty starting to shine through. This is perfectly done 5-7-5-7-7
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Yes, joy can be uncovered in many places/situations. Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from zanya
Here are sentiments to help us keep Hope alive as we muddle through this 'virus strife' how lucky we are that we looking forward to Spring and not the dark days of winter -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Here are sentiments to help us keep Hope alive as we muddle through this 'virus strife' how lucky we are that we looking forward to Spring and not the dark days of winter -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Yes, joy can be uncovered in many places/situations. Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image, Trisha,
and I like the presentation, too.
-You have written a good tanka.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you announce the
arrival of spring, and the
pivot line is very good.
-A good ending with
a positive message about enjoying spring.
-One small thing: Its colors
-Thanks for sharing this, and
have a great day and week ahead.
-Hope you are doing well.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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-Great image, Trisha,
and I like the presentation, too.
-You have written a good tanka.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you announce the
arrival of spring, and the
pivot line is very good.
-A good ending with
a positive message about enjoying spring.
-One small thing: Its colors
-Thanks for sharing this, and
have a great day and week ahead.
-Hope you are doing well.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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I changed the color, any better? Be safe and thanks for your usual positive review,
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome, Trisha. I didn't mean the background color. That was fine. You wrote It's color [It's needs to be Its]. Sorry it was confusing.
