The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "How to get away ... with murder?"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Since you wrote this short story, the riots started and the streets were packed with protesters. It made you disgusted when the statutes were being torn down by protestors. Violence is on the rise. Pray!
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Since you wrote this short story, the riots started and the streets were packed with protesters. It made you disgusted when the statutes were being torn down by protestors. Violence is on the rise. Pray!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another great addition, my lady -- stay strong!! ;) Yvette
Philippines they will --> Philippines, and they will
went west side! --> went sideways!
thought, he can get away with this crime, but guess what... is not going to. --> thought he could get away with this crime, but guess what? He is not going to.
between 20 and 25th --> between the 20th and 25th
cavalry, alias police. --> cavalry (aka police).
the flux of drugs --> the influx of drugs
More over Police, in --> Moreover police, in
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Another great addition, my lady -- stay strong!! ;) Yvette
Philippines they will --> Philippines, and they will
went west side! --> went sideways!
thought, he can get away with this crime, but guess what... is not going to. --> thought he could get away with this crime, but guess what? He is not going to.
between 20 and 25th --> between the 20th and 25th
cavalry, alias police. --> cavalry (aka police).
the flux of drugs --> the influx of drugs
More over Police, in --> Moreover police, in
Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
Comment from estory
I liked the part when the criminals applied for welfare because they can't commit crimes while people are home in their houses. Another strange side effect of coronavirus. Crime is down. Or will it stay down? As desperation grows, people may take those guns and take matters into their own hands....estory
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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I liked the part when the criminals applied for welfare because they can't commit crimes while people are home in their houses. Another strange side effect of coronavirus. Crime is down. Or will it stay down? As desperation grows, people may take those guns and take matters into their own hands....estory
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Unfortunately I think it will get up, because of scarce of resources available.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are again right on target. This is the perfect time for all sorts of crime waves. Home is a safe place to be. I hope people will learn to be content there.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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You are again right on target. This is the perfect time for all sorts of crime waves. Home is a safe place to be. I hope people will learn to be content there.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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I hope too, but I already heard about robbers that went wrong.
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Keep an eye peeled for this sort of behavior.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you give us international information and the news of how the virus affected people. That's horrible that someone lied and infected all those people!
"yup still alieve" (yup, still alive)
"n New Mexico, El Salvador, Honduras and Columbia, " (Why New Mexico? You mean Mexico? New Mexico is one of the states of the US) All the rest are countries except for New Mexico which is a state.
"eed to wear a read mask " (red?)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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I like how you give us international information and the news of how the virus affected people. That's horrible that someone lied and infected all those people!
"yup still alieve" (yup, still alive)
"n New Mexico, El Salvador, Honduras and Columbia, " (Why New Mexico? You mean Mexico? New Mexico is one of the states of the US) All the rest are countries except for New Mexico which is a state.
"eed to wear a read mask " (red?)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Wow, thanks, I had no idea that New Mexico is a state:) I am always confused for example we have a London in Ontario, and I am laughing about that, like really LONDON. Anyway as always thank you for your support and the grammar corrections. Happy Easter, my friend
Comment from Spitfire
This was depressing. Positive that the crime rate is going down, but in the end you predict it will rise. The story about the man who lied and infected the whole hospital shows how selfish humanity can be. There's a film on Netflix called The Platform which illustrates symbolically that idea.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This was depressing. Positive that the crime rate is going down, but in the end you predict it will rise. The story about the man who lied and infected the whole hospital shows how selfish humanity can be. There's a film on Netflix called The Platform which illustrates symbolically that idea.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thanks I should give it a try to that movie on Netflix. That guy went with his lover and was affraid that the wife will find out, which eventually found out. He infected his mistress, the mistress daughter, his son, daughter-in-law which is pregnat, 2 yr old nephew the wife and all the colleagues from his place of work. Honestly, I feel like shooting the mother f... , pardon my french.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, there have been a lot of robberies on, of all places, optician's shops of expensive sunglasses, but it's interesting, I think this is definitely God shaking the earth at this time Iza, well done, a good effort, I think your written English is improving, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : He lied that (he) went on a trip... Corenella hit the g(r)ound..
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Oh yes indeed, there have been a lot of robberies on, of all places, optician's shops of expensive sunglasses, but it's interesting, I think this is definitely God shaking the earth at this time Iza, well done, a good effort, I think your written English is improving, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : He lied that (he) went on a trip... Corenella hit the g(r)ound..
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing and Happy Easter.
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Well done
Comment from GE Parson
Dear Iza,
Enjoyed your post, Where did you get all those statistics?
Frankly I feel like the U.S. is under Martial Law and I resent it. I understand Big Brother is only concerned for our health, but when this Flu bug is over, what else will Big Brother decide we need their protection so declare
Martial Law. I fear our way of living is going to be greatly change when this flu thing is declare over.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Dear Iza,
Enjoyed your post, Where did you get all those statistics?
Frankly I feel like the U.S. is under Martial Law and I resent it. I understand Big Brother is only concerned for our health, but when this Flu bug is over, what else will Big Brother decide we need their protection so declare
Martial Law. I fear our way of living is going to be greatly change when this flu thing is declare over.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Good Evening Mr. Parson, I have added the sources on my notes, there are two articles that I found really interesting for this topic. I have not deep dive into the USA statistics, because that will make this text too long. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, please stay safe and away from Big Brother.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your journal entry. I found it enlightening with some facts I didn't know or stats I hadn't heard. I know you are being sarcastic with some points; but, many are true and scary. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and give your kitties a pat on their heads for me. Respectfully, Jan
law-suite--->lawsuit (near beginning
when the police is---police are (near the end)
Police doesn't require capitalizing in the middle of a sentence
you mentioned New Mexico--I believe you mean Mexico
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed reading your journal entry. I found it enlightening with some facts I didn't know or stats I hadn't heard. I know you are being sarcastic with some points; but, many are true and scary. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and give your kitties a pat on their heads for me. Respectfully, Jan
law-suite--->lawsuit (near beginning
when the police is---police are (near the end)
Police doesn't require capitalizing in the middle of a sentence
you mentioned New Mexico--I believe you mean Mexico
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Jan thank you for the corrections and for reading. Patted the kids alias the cats as requested.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Iza, I have to let you know, I'm getting a little tired of the topic so my mind may not have been entirely on point... but it was good. The stats and the images you projected.
I have been thinking myself... what of all those warriors that were so full of death and destruction in the Middle East? That's all we ever heard about before this... now not a thing. Did everyone run into their little caves to wait out the sickness? ... or are they all dead of Corona in all their little terrorist caves? lol... one can only hope terrorism has bitten the big Corona one! LOL
(Coronella)... Corona or Coronavirus
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Iza, I have to let you know, I'm getting a little tired of the topic so my mind may not have been entirely on point... but it was good. The stats and the images you projected.
I have been thinking myself... what of all those warriors that were so full of death and destruction in the Middle East? That's all we ever heard about before this... now not a thing. Did everyone run into their little caves to wait out the sickness? ... or are they all dead of Corona in all their little terrorist caves? lol... one can only hope terrorism has bitten the big Corona one! LOL
(Coronella)... Corona or Coronavirus
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Susan, I am tired too that is why I changed the name to Coronella:) every day I am thinking that I am not going to write about this anymore, and then funny facts are surfacing and made me add another and another chapter:) thank you for your patience and skipp it if is too much:) Anyway thank you so much for stopping bye and reading, please stay safe and when things are taugh, laugh and pray:)
Love,
Iza