NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Pink Rose"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your poem, Alicia! I like flowers, too. My favorite lines were:
"The beauty of a pink rose is blushing and bold,
As it seems to dance, Delighting hearts young and old."
It's great to have the contrasting adjectives at the end of these lines to who the influence of flowers!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Loved your poem, Alicia! I like flowers, too. My favorite lines were:
"The beauty of a pink rose is blushing and bold,
As it seems to dance, Delighting hearts young and old."
It's great to have the contrasting adjectives at the end of these lines to who the influence of flowers!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Helen! You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the pink rose and the meaning and how it affects us in our daily lives. Pink the innocence if a young girl or it can be the first signs of sunrise.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about the pink rose and the meaning and how it affects us in our daily lives. Pink the innocence if a young girl or it can be the first signs of sunrise.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra. You're nice. Thank you. Happy Easter :)
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your selection of the "pink rose" to welcome Easter weekend. I admired your "grand gesture" of adding the matching pictures and your appealing rhyme scheme. Here's to "happiness" and "tenderness"! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your selection of the "pink rose" to welcome Easter weekend. I admired your "grand gesture" of adding the matching pictures and your appealing rhyme scheme. Here's to "happiness" and "tenderness"! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! You're the best... And nice too. Thank you. Happy Easter! Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
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Enjoy the remaining hours of the Easter bunny's visit. Smiles- Joan
Comment from susand3022
Hi Sunnilicious, This is a nice rhyming poem about roses... Spring is springing... somewhere... I know it's trying here... Summer won't be far behind and that's the time for roses! :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Sunnilicious, This is a nice rhyming poem about roses... Spring is springing... somewhere... I know it's trying here... Summer won't be far behind and that's the time for roses! :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Susan! You're nice. Thank you.
Happy Easter!
Comment from royowen
It looks like you've written an heroic Rispetto or pretty close, an unusual style for you, you have chosen a marvellous theme, that of flowers and the colours that define different events in our lives, wonderfully done my friend, an excellent post, happy Easter, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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It looks like you've written an heroic Rispetto or pretty close, an unusual style for you, you have chosen a marvellous theme, that of flowers and the colours that define different events in our lives, wonderfully done my friend, an excellent post, happy Easter, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! You're the best. Thank you again. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
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Bless you
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Good job
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Your poem is beautiful. The pink rose is such a gorgeous flower. Your piece is well composed and flows well. Good rhyming. Image is perfect. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Alicia. Your poem is beautiful. The pink rose is such a gorgeous flower. Your piece is well composed and flows well. Good rhyming. Image is perfect. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you. Goodnight.
Happy Easter :)
