Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Maiden Voyage"na-po-wri-mo contest
6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the Titanic whose maiden voyage was also her last when tragic strikes on her journey and sinked to the ocean with many passengers.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the Titanic whose maiden voyage was also her last when tragic strikes on her journey and sinked to the ocean with many passengers.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your review and compliment. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great addition to your book, Dove. Good job with the syllable count per line. The image is a good pairing, too. Your words are true although poignant. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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This is a great addition to your book, Dove. Good job with the syllable count per line. The image is a good pairing, too. Your words are true although poignant. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Dear Jan, Thank you for your review and compliments. Yours, Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, this would have been a worthy contender, Dove -- it really is too bad that you didn't get it in on time! ;) Thanx for sharing your vision, though -- beautifully done!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Oh, this would have been a worthy contender, Dove -- it really is too bad that you didn't get it in on time! ;) Thanx for sharing your vision, though -- beautifully done!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Dear Yvette, Thank you for your review and compliments. Dove
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi!
Good effort for what would have been a FanStory contest entry.
Another ship tragedy happened on NY's East River in warmer June(!) weather - check out on the internet the General Slocum Disaster, which happened 10+ years before. The fatality rate greatly exceeded the Titanic.
P.S. I too have used avmurray for artwork.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Hi!
Good effort for what would have been a FanStory contest entry.
Another ship tragedy happened on NY's East River in warmer June(!) weather - check out on the internet the General Slocum Disaster, which happened 10+ years before. The fatality rate greatly exceeded the Titanic.
P.S. I too have used avmurray for artwork.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Dear Mark, Thanks for your compliment and review. Thanks also for the info. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this descriptive piece that sounds much ike a poetic newspaper headline. The last line
summarizes effectively.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this descriptive piece that sounds much ike a poetic newspaper headline. The last line
summarizes effectively.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Dear Janice, Thanks for your compliments and review, Dove
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Uncontrollable fate causes tragic disaster to the maiden voyager of the Titanic as if it was destined to be a historic voyage for the voyagers; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Uncontrollable fate causes tragic disaster to the maiden voyager of the Titanic as if it was destined to be a historic voyage for the voyagers; well said, well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Dear Alcreator Litt Dear thank you for your review and compliments. Dove