Dealing With Charles
80 Word contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is funny in a morbid sort of way. How inconsiderate of someone to die and create all that extra work for his co-worker. Now accounting is the perfect place to put him. The know all about dealing with paperwork. Its what they do. Very nicely done flash fiction.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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This is funny in a morbid sort of way. How inconsiderate of someone to die and create all that extra work for his co-worker. Now accounting is the perfect place to put him. The know all about dealing with paperwork. Its what they do. Very nicely done flash fiction.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Beth. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. I hope you have a wonderful week.
Ron
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, Mystery Author. It is funny in a weird way. You did a good job with this unique little story. The ending was unexpected. The image is a perfect pairing, too. Best wishes Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Well, Mystery Author. It is funny in a weird way. You did a good job with this unique little story. The ending was unexpected. The image is a perfect pairing, too. Best wishes Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Jan. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Poor Charles. No one wants extra paperwork though. I laughed, sorry Charles, but you did a great job with this and i Hope you made a lot of other people laugh :)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Poor Charles. No one wants extra paperwork though. I laughed, sorry Charles, but you did a great job with this and i Hope you made a lot of other people laugh :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, EL. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. That's all I was going for. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from LisaMay
This story is a good example of lateral thinking problem-solving. You should be promoted for "passing the Chuck". A clever story that I enjoyed very much.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This story is a good example of lateral thinking problem-solving. You should be promoted for "passing the Chuck". A clever story that I enjoyed very much.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Passing the Chuck. Hahaha. Thank you for the chuckle and the fantastic review, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous little story.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an entertaining piece of writing for the 80 Word Flash Fiction entry with a surprising ending. Ingenious. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This is an entertaining piece of writing for the 80 Word Flash Fiction entry with a surprising ending. Ingenious. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rebecca. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from LyndaS
Ha! Loved this. You wrote a well structured, hilarious and complete story in 80 words. Very visual as I pictured easily this woman dragging a dead body to Accounting. LOL! Well done. Have a great weekend. Lynda
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Ha! Loved this. You wrote a well structured, hilarious and complete story in 80 words. Very visual as I pictured easily this woman dragging a dead body to Accounting. LOL! Well done. Have a great weekend. Lynda
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the excellent review and the giant sixer, Lynda. I hope you have yourself a wonderful weekend as well. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece. Thank you again.
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Any time.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Great humour! You have rightly posted or moved or transferred the man from Sales department to Accounting department; well said, well done. Wish you best of luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Great humour! You have rightly posted or moved or transferred the man from Sales department to Accounting department; well said, well done. Wish you best of luck for the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Al. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer you did get a chuckle out of me because that was funny because the emphasis was not even on the person being dead it was on having the right paperwork done at the correct time. Now when you say you had to drag the person over to get the paperwork done that was the straw on the camel's back that broke my tickle box. That flash fiction story made me laugh
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Writer you did get a chuckle out of me because that was funny because the emphasis was not even on the person being dead it was on having the right paperwork done at the correct time. Now when you say you had to drag the person over to get the paperwork done that was the straw on the camel's back that broke my tickle box. That flash fiction story made me laugh
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Mary. I'm glad you had a chuckle over this silliness. I really appreciate the gracious stars. Have a good weekend.
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Yes a little humor sparked me. Thanks for sharing
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! very well written and very humorous, I can just imagine you dragging him from one point to another, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Ha! Ha! very well written and very humorous, I can just imagine you dragging him from one point to another, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, kahpot. I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
