NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Snapshots!"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
9 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. I like your snapshot poem. Each vignette describes what we hope to accomplish with the photo. Like the snapshots, each description given is like a moment captured in time. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Alicia. I like your snapshot poem. Each vignette describes what we hope to accomplish with the photo. Like the snapshots, each description given is like a moment captured in time. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hellow Marilyn. You're the best. Thank you
Have a wonderful day :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written series of hay(na)ku as snap shots in words that describe a picture of certain events that we will usually takes a photo of to remember these moments.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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A very well-written series of hay(na)ku as snap shots in words that describe a picture of certain events that we will usually takes a photo of to remember these moments.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you
Happy Easter :)
Comment from lyenochka
What cool graphics you used to present your poem! I like how your poem notes all those milestones in life when we take so many photographs. But when we get old, will we take time to look at them all?
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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What cool graphics you used to present your poem! I like how your poem notes all those milestones in life when we take so many photographs. But when we get old, will we take time to look at them all?
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Helen! Traditions carry on... They will with me if I ever find a good man to marry me and make a child or three. You're nice. You could always pass pics to the children and grandchildren. Thank you. God bless you :)
Comment from Enoima Okon
Hi Sunnilicious,
I can feel your poem you know. Unbelievably, it speaks to each and everyone of us, cos one way or the other, we'd all find ourselves celebrating the above mentioned events in your poem.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Eno
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Sunnilicious,
I can feel your poem you know. Unbelievably, it speaks to each and everyone of us, cos one way or the other, we'd all find ourselves celebrating the above mentioned events in your poem.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.
Eno
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Eno! And it should repeat over and over again. Thank you. Wishing you plenty of love. Happy Easter :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for introducing me to the hay(na)ku form and sharing your reflections about photograph collections. I enjoyed your "Snapshots" and energized illustrations very much. Happy long Easter weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you for introducing me to the hay(na)ku form and sharing your reflections about photograph collections. I enjoyed your "Snapshots" and energized illustrations very much. Happy long Easter weekend- Joan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! You're nice. It's a good form, words versus syllables and still under 21-syllables. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment from royowen
We have many, many photos, over the years we have done much travelling and lots of family photos, not many from my youth, when I was a little boy, or from my teen years. A very clever collection of imagery, a sort of collage, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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We have many, many photos, over the years we have done much travelling and lots of family photos, not many from my youth, when I was a little boy, or from my teen years. A very clever collection of imagery, a sort of collage, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! I'm sure your photo collection is a wonderful. You're children probably say the same thing as you. You're nice. Thank you. God bless you :)
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Well done Alicia,
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was fun to read and a great style to use to commemorate those special events if one isn't doing so already. I enjoyed reading you well-constructed poem. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This was fun to read and a great style to use to commemorate those special events if one isn't doing so already. I enjoyed reading you well-constructed poem. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hi Jan! You're very kind. Thank you. Happy Easter. God bless you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "childbirths
giving life
to right wrongs", because it portrays a life is given to make a positive difference in the world!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Philippians 1:6 English Standard Version (ESV)
6 And I am sure of this, that he who began a good work in you will bring it to completion at the day of Jesus Christ.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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My favorite part was, "childbirths
giving life
to right wrongs", because it portrays a life is given to make a positive difference in the world!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Philippians 1:6 English Standard Version (ESV)
6 And I am sure of this, that he who began a good work in you will bring it to completion at the day of Jesus Christ.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Hi! I didn't write that stanza because of a holy quote. I wrote it because new parents commonly talk about being nothing like their parents with this new child. I appreciate the quote. Every person from any religion deserves the right to love, marriage and child. Thank you. God bless you :)
Comment from Drew Delaney
This was so cool, sunnilicious! I love how the little wind mills dance around. Adds so much to the poem. And what a poem. An awesome bit of writing. My favourite ... childbirths
giving life
to right wrongs
Nice work!
Stay well! Drew xx
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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This was so cool, sunnilicious! I love how the little wind mills dance around. Adds so much to the poem. And what a poem. An awesome bit of writing. My favourite ... childbirths
giving life
to right wrongs
Nice work!
Stay well! Drew xx
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
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Thank you
God bless you :)
