Open Your Eyes!
The mind keeps the heart young...23 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
I think you may be asked by others besides me about the heart being able to imagine. But I get your meaning. How about "the mind's imagination"?
Then your sentence above the title works beautifully. And it's a neat picture.
Just a suggestion.
pome lover
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I think you may be asked by others besides me about the heart being able to imagine. But I get your meaning. How about "the mind's imagination"?
Then your sentence above the title works beautifully. And it's a neat picture.
Just a suggestion.
pome lover
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Naaaah, think I like it just the way it is... :) Thank you very much for your review and your kind suggestion!
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okay and you're welcome. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. The image pairs nicely with your well-chosen two lines. I like the rhyme. Your message is clear. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. The image pairs nicely with your well-chosen two lines. I like the rhyme. Your message is clear. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Many thanks for your comments and your stars.
Comment from papa55mike
What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. This is the best entry of this contest I've read today. I love the rhyme.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. This is the best entry of this contest I've read today. I love the rhyme.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Oh, Papa!! You don't know what kind of a smile you just put on my face -THANK YOU for those comments and those stars!! And I'm so glad it sounds as though you found a smile in this little 'shortie' which is an even bigger reason for me to smile about it -- be sure to pass that smile along and let it linger to lift your spirits!! ;) Take care! ;) :)
