Sensuous Revelry
Won't you come along with me?14 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, nice. I think we're all craving a change of scene these days. I certainly am. Beautiful image and I like your alliteration here. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Oh, nice. I think we're all craving a change of scene these days. I certainly am. Beautiful image and I like your alliteration here. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Oh, yes -- change of scenery and warmer weather, yeah?! :) ;) Thanx for the review on this one, Marilyn! ;)
Comment from Lobber
The author did a remarkable job of balanced alliteration combined with a graphic that hits upon every element - a brush-type tree, gentle waves,
light that sings and a tempting
beach. - Lob
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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The author did a remarkable job of balanced alliteration combined with a graphic that hits upon every element - a brush-type tree, gentle waves,
light that sings and a tempting
beach. - Lob
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - join me on the beach anytime... Thank you for your review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twelve-word poem, Sensuous Revelry, has the correct word count and employs a nifty rhyme to encourage readers to head for the sand and surf. Fun.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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This twelve-word poem, Sensuous Revelry, has the correct word count and employs a nifty rhyme to encourage readers to head for the sand and surf. Fun.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - thank you!
Comment from RShipp
You have the required twelve words for your poem.
The picture you selected accompanied was a great selection.
Soon!!!???!!! I crave walks in the park ... mountain hikes with vista sunsets ... campfires and hot dogs ...
I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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You have the required twelve words for your poem.
The picture you selected accompanied was a great selection.
Soon!!!???!!! I crave walks in the park ... mountain hikes with vista sunsets ... campfires and hot dogs ...
I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hooray ? I hear the smile in your words? my work here is done (wink, wink!)... Thank you! ;-)
Comment from flylikeaneagle
PenPal: great alliteration and thoughts about a warmer time.
We will be getting a white Resurrection Sunday with snow. The
sea water is so soft and relaxing. Hope you win! flylikeaneagle
Stay safe.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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PenPal: great alliteration and thoughts about a warmer time.
We will be getting a white Resurrection Sunday with snow. The
sea water is so soft and relaxing. Hope you win! flylikeaneagle
Stay safe.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - thank you!
Comment from sunnilicious
Great artwork choice, especially for me to read on Good Friday. Good presentation. Nice alliterations with B and W words. Nice perspective for a daydream. Great work :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Great artwork choice, especially for me to read on Good Friday. Good presentation. Nice alliterations with B and W words. Nice perspective for a daydream. Great work :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - thank you!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Beaches are lovely places to be. You can find yourself there--how small you really are in comparison to the span of the ocean, the strength of the wind, and the heat of the sand.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Beaches are lovely places to be. You can find yourself there--how small you really are in comparison to the span of the ocean, the strength of the wind, and the heat of the sand.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one, Rebecca - thank you!
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I enjoy good writing that tickles the brain.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sensuous Revelry
Hello, my friend,
I'll come away with you. I love the beach :) Great little poem. Good word count and a very nice presentation. It's a good entry for the 12 word poetry contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Sensuous Revelry
Hello, my friend,
I'll come away with you. I love the beach :) Great little poem. Good word count and a very nice presentation. It's a good entry for the 12 word poetry contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - thank you!
Comment from Kathleen S.
Inviting poetry to whom it calls to lands of escape. Beautiful scenery. The author calls to the one it is written for, an awaits an answer. One wonders if the couple made it there?
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Inviting poetry to whom it calls to lands of escape. Beautiful scenery. The author calls to the one it is written for, an awaits an answer. One wonders if the couple made it there?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Magnificent, beautiful and wonderful tropical beaches, you can invite anyone of your loved ones and enjoy having sensuous revelry there; well said in this 12 word poem.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Magnificent, beautiful and wonderful tropical beaches, you can invite anyone of your loved ones and enjoy having sensuous revelry there; well said in this 12 word poem.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wonderful of you to drop by for this one - thank you!