Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Diamonds and Jade "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - the fact that you pulled off a monorhyme with such beauty is great! ;) I would only suggest not over-using the capital letters as it is very distracting from your messaging... Best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Wow - the fact that you pulled off a monorhyme with such beauty is great! ;) I would only suggest not over-using the capital letters as it is very distracting from your messaging... Best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the Review and Continued Support. The Caps is habit proving hard to break for me.
I tend to see two messages when constructing my poems. LOL. Thanks Again.
Comment from papa55mike
What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. Please check this line, hich (which) weren't easily slayed.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. Please check this line, hich (which) weren't easily slayed.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and correction, I missed that when reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.