Oh Life!
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Comment from steevie
So just because someone has no money, it does not mean that they are nobody. There are merely people without money and sometimes temporarily.
well done
steve
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So just because someone has no money, it does not mean that they are nobody. There are merely people without money and sometimes temporarily.
well done
steve
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from Adri7enne
Yes, the world is seldom kind to the penniless. I think you're trying to say that one can be abundant in spirit, even when poor in cash, or vice versa. You keep searching for ways to get your points across. Just that takes courage. Keep doing it, A.
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Yes, the world is seldom kind to the penniless. I think you're trying to say that one can be abundant in spirit, even when poor in cash, or vice versa. You keep searching for ways to get your points across. Just that takes courage. Keep doing it, A.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from Deniz22
It must be tough writing a new language. When your author's notes are longer than your poem, you might be in trouble. I'm riding it out cause the money's good.
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It must be tough writing a new language. When your author's notes are longer than your poem, you might be in trouble. I'm riding it out cause the money's good.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from PoeticXscape
This is an interesting poem. When I read it the voice in my head was Scottish Because the words seems Scottish, Thanks for sharing this.
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This is an interesting poem. When I read it the voice in my head was Scottish Because the words seems Scottish, Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from Sally Carter
I find it sad that you are posting a mass of poems, apparently with the intention of being as obtuse as possible.
I have no idea what this poem means, and I cannot believe that any reader truly does. It is not good poetry when the writer has to write author notes that are longer than the poem itself.
Also, why are you writing in a Scottish dialect?
I am sure you are a passionate person with a lot to say, and I hope that whatever impulse is causing you to behave this way will soon ease, leaving you better able to communicate with your readers.
Sally
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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I find it sad that you are posting a mass of poems, apparently with the intention of being as obtuse as possible.
I have no idea what this poem means, and I cannot believe that any reader truly does. It is not good poetry when the writer has to write author notes that are longer than the poem itself.
Also, why are you writing in a Scottish dialect?
I am sure you are a passionate person with a lot to say, and I hope that whatever impulse is causing you to behave this way will soon ease, leaving you better able to communicate with your readers.
Sally
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
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Comment from terry drake
Interesting array of tidbits of nothing in a poem for our enjoyment. You received your recognition for a job well don, congratulations.
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Interesting array of tidbits of nothing in a poem for our enjoyment. You received your recognition for a job well don, congratulations.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from ravenblack
I say to thee, Nay! I understand you are trying to be playful, but you cannot have your poems depend on author notes that, quite frankly, are often befuddling, and a glossary/atlas of the word according to Alcreator. Please, listen to what many , who strive to be truthful, are trying to tell you over and over and over....
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I say to thee, Nay! I understand you are trying to be playful, but you cannot have your poems depend on author notes that, quite frankly, are often befuddling, and a glossary/atlas of the word according to Alcreator. Please, listen to what many , who strive to be truthful, are trying to tell you over and over and over....
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
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Comment from donaldww
Your reached the nadir. The nirvana of nada. Square root of nothing.
Rabba dab dab,
three words on a slab.
But not brillig.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Your reached the nadir. The nirvana of nada. Square root of nothing.
Rabba dab dab,
three words on a slab.
But not brillig.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
I'm beginning to find the humor in your writings. You leave it to the reader to 'figure out' or 'decipher' what you are saying? The notes are a bit helpful- but THEY need to be explained as well. Apparently, you have a LOT to say, it's just a shame you have not learned communication skills. Thanks for allowing me to read this. Betty
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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I'm beginning to find the humor in your writings. You leave it to the reader to 'figure out' or 'decipher' what you are saying? The notes are a bit helpful- but THEY need to be explained as well. Apparently, you have a LOT to say, it's just a shame you have not learned communication skills. Thanks for allowing me to read this. Betty
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
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Comment from mikenbel
The syllable count noted is followed...but I am really trying to understand the flow ... the rhyme ... the reason. I guess I must just be a traditionalist and expect my poetry to tell an actual story.
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The syllable count noted is followed...but I am really trying to understand the flow ... the rhyme ... the reason. I guess I must just be a traditionalist and expect my poetry to tell an actual story.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
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