Comment from guinea

Excellent

Your words flow smoothly and sincerely. The Issues you are talking about are important. Keep up with your writing. I am fascinated.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

Comment from Nebukadneser

Excellent

Brilliant as always my friend - I must say I had to read it twice to understand it, but it is amazing once you catch on it lies there in front of you open and easy to understand and grip. Great philosophy to be nothing - nada
Well done!
You're a star

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

Comment from Kit Parker

Excellent

This is an interesting use of language and rhythm. I'm still not certain I fully understand the message but that's alright because I like it when a piece is so artful that I'm still thinking about it days later. That is what I will be doing. Your author notes even reads like a poem. Good work. - PEACE -

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

I actually don't understand the metaphors but I a admire your tenacity and determination to continue on this particular vision that you have created. keep writting
looking for more...

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Once there was a verse
with nothing as the basis
I could write one worse
Be Nada as the stasis
with slow and plodding paces

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

Comment from emjaihammond

Good

So sorry Al, but I just don't get this one, even after several reads and with your authors notes. I always do my best to comprehend, to look for the meaning behind the words you have written. It's always kind of a riddle for me to solve. But this time, it's over my head. I hope you will try to make it just a little easier to understand for the average reader like me.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

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THANKS

Comment from whispersofthesoul

Good

hiya,
yeah i get your words i speak a couple of them: but what the hell does this mean? its like decoding a message
i was just beginning to figure out your logic.
i would love to leave your work alone but your like a virus that confuses me

whispers xx

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

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Comment from cephira

Good

Enjoyed the alliteration in this one. Congrats on your blue ribbon and All Time Best seal, ALD, and for the author's notes.
Cephira

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is very creative I think I did understand it with the authors notes I must say though well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a good poem I didn't like this one as much as I liked the other poems I must admit it didn't grab me like the rest thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2013