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Comment from Green Peg
Hello Alcreator, I must admit I did enjoy "Nada!" when you so thoughfully left an authors note to help one along with your line of thought.
Well done I some how can relate to the penniless state after the week has shot through, I would love to read more of your poems, when I am back online soon
It is a pleasure to me you.
Warm regards
Green Peg. .
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Hello Alcreator, I must admit I did enjoy "Nada!" when you so thoughfully left an authors note to help one along with your line of thought.
Well done I some how can relate to the penniless state after the week has shot through, I would love to read more of your poems, when I am back online soon
It is a pleasure to me you.
Warm regards
Green Peg. .
Comment Written 18-Jul-2006
Comment from Pnpebbles
Very well done. You were consistent with the format. Thank you for adding the authors notes as this enhanced the read. I also liked the picture you chose to accompany your poem. Good job.
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Very well done. You were consistent with the format. Thank you for adding the authors notes as this enhanced the read. I also liked the picture you chose to accompany your poem. Good job.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2006
Comment from Mzhurst
Although I am not even close and make no claims on being a competent reviewer for Tanka poems, I do realize the difficulty in writng them. You have done an excellent job with this one.
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Although I am not even close and make no claims on being a competent reviewer for Tanka poems, I do realize the difficulty in writng them. You have done an excellent job with this one.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2006
Comment from WorstPoetic Reviewer
This Tanka poem is in perfect syllable counting; one can think of one's prestige, power state when one is penniless; no one cares a penniless soul he is then not even fit for game, he is doomed for nothing, no soul considered; it is an excellent message true at every inch so briefly but boldly captured; enjoyed reading.
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This Tanka poem is in perfect syllable counting; one can think of one's prestige, power state when one is penniless; no one cares a penniless soul he is then not even fit for game, he is doomed for nothing, no soul considered; it is an excellent message true at every inch so briefly but boldly captured; enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 15-May-2006
Comment from Authoroni
ALCREATOR WRITER: Just read your Be Nada! Thank you so much for the translation - it helps, but your author's note clarifies. With that, and reading it again I can claim and/or incorporate into my own realm, and it can become a saying I can use as I approach pennilessness at the end of each month. This is delightful, Good job, well done!.
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ALCREATOR WRITER: Just read your Be Nada! Thank you so much for the translation - it helps, but your author's note clarifies. With that, and reading it again I can claim and/or incorporate into my own realm, and it can become a saying I can use as I approach pennilessness at the end of each month. This is delightful, Good job, well done!.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2006
Comment from Larry T
I am glad you added the note. Now it makes much more sense. I am part Scottish but not enough to know the language. This is a very well written poem!
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I am glad you added the note. Now it makes much more sense. I am part Scottish but not enough to know the language. This is a very well written poem!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2006
Comment from Twigs13
This was a challenge to read. It was more of a study. but the more I read it over and over the more I understood it (thanks to your notes) and then I started to like it. I gave you five stars just because you were smart enough to write this.
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This was a challenge to read. It was more of a study. but the more I read it over and over the more I understood it (thanks to your notes) and then I started to like it. I gave you five stars just because you were smart enough to write this.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2006
Comment from WhisperingTruth
What a fun little Tanka about "nothing". :)
Thanks for entertaining us and educating us at the same time.
"Be nadir, nada!
When tall penniless you are
They nab, call "naebody"
Nap and name you "na", "naething"
"No room", "nae game", "doom you are"! "
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What a fun little Tanka about "nothing". :)
Thanks for entertaining us and educating us at the same time.
"Be nadir, nada!
When tall penniless you are
They nab, call "naebody"
Nap and name you "na", "naething"
"No room", "nae game", "doom you are"! "
Comment Written 28-Apr-2006
Comment from RaymondJohn
It's always nice to hear a little gaelic. I liked this short work very much. Thanks so much for offering it. I wouldn't change a word. All the best. Ray.
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It's always nice to hear a little gaelic. I liked this short work very much. Thanks so much for offering it. I wouldn't change a word. All the best. Ray.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2006
Comment from KRHolbrook
I found this quite interesting how you placed into it different words than the regular English sayings. A very short and sweet poem that strikes the point right off the bat.
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I found this quite interesting how you placed into it different words than the regular English sayings. A very short and sweet poem that strikes the point right off the bat.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2006
