Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twelve-word poem, Keyboard Attraction, has the correct word count and mystifies the reader as to what the title has to do with the poem. I take it someone fell in love over a piano.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review Bill. It was actually over a computer, hence the title

reply by Bill Schott on 11-Apr-2020

Of course. I totally missed that. My wife is a pianist, so I will use that as my excuse.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. The art you paired with your 12 words is beautiful. Unfortunately, the neon blue is very difficult to read. Perhaps darken the font OR lighten the background. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020

Thanks Jan. The font colour has now been changed, hopefully make it a little easier to read.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written 12 word poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings,Teri

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

People should connect by words first--on an intellectual level, and if both are playing truthfully, then a permanent relationship might be in the making. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

Great little poem. Good word count and a very nice presentation. It's a good entry for the 12-word poetry contest. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What an awesome perspective for two hearts!! ;) This is a wonderful offering for this limited format contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Words can have the greatest power when used in love. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture.

Good luckin the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

It is indeed all that was needed. The power in words will outlast many things that will be gone before the impact of those words dissipates. I love the message conveyed in this and enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Kathleen S.

Excellent

Very beautiful poem on human desire, of real connection that speaks of two souls communicating, a shared train of thought and more... opportunities not yet taken, but hope given to what may be.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review. A true poem that turned into 15 years of marriage, so far at least.

reply by Kathleen S. on 10-Apr-2020

That's quite awesome. :)

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Verbal communication is so important in getting to know someone. Through their words, hopefully we will be able to assess sincerity and a compatibility of thought, humour, and emotional connection. Your poem shows this bond is sufficient and then it can be playtime!

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020

Thanks for your review Lisa. Glad you enjoyed.